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Stanford University

June 28, 2007

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am applying to your Master program of "Cognitive Neuroscience" with specialization in "Action, Perception & Consciousness" starting in September 2008. My career ambition is to become a doctor researching Brain-Computer Interface (BCI).

In high school I graduated with mathematics and physics as my majors. I am continuing my academic career with the study of "Knowledge Engineering | Computer Science" at Technical University of Munich. In June 2008 I will graduate with a Bachelor of Science degree with an expected average score above 85 percent. While I rank among the top five students, I am trying to graduate among the top three.

As my first exposure to neuroscience I took the course "Knowledge Representation and Cognitive Psychology" (KPCP) in my studies. I was especially impressed that, despite of the advances in technology, there remains much to learn about ourselves, most especially about the human brain. After attending your Open Day, I became acquainted with the fascinating method of BCI. I want to study at your university and focus on BCI because that allows me to combine both my interests in learning more about applied computer science as well as investigating cognitive processes.

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"Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,

Mein Name ist ***. Derzeit beende ich mein Studium an der Fakultät für *** an der *** (пишете название своего универа) im Fach (номер специальности) – „***“(название специальности и Ваша квалификация.

А дальше пишете о себе, своих успехах и о выборе направления в будущем месте учебы.