Эт снова я=)))И снова прошу о помощи! Проверте этот текст на англ. язые на ошибки! ОГРОМНОЕ СПАСИБО!!

I’ve been asked to tell you about myself.
So, I live in Ukraine in a little beautiful village Zgurivka. I love my country and my village very much.
I have a mum and dad. I love them.
I like animals very much. I have three dogs.
I like different music. Rock, pop, rap, classic and other stiles. But the most the Beatles. I think, they are eternal.
I like to write and to read poems. Also, I like to read Lori Foster, Irina Metelizia, Michailo Bulhakov, Irena Karpa and other.
I am a big fan of football. I like watching interesting matches on TV.
When I was a little girl and lived with my grandparents I was always called by the surname of my drandparents instead of my surname.
And finally I would like to tell you about my ambitions and plant for the future.
I think I’d like to be something kind of lawyer, psychologist or art designer.

вроде как-то так

>I’m keen different music<

Предлог где?

>I like write and read poems.<

После like - ing овая форма глагола. К двум последующим предложениям это также относится.

>Ok, now something else about me.<

Else тут ни к черту абсолютно.

>When I was a little girl and live with my grandparents <

Live - время-то какое, если до это был was?

>I always instead of my surname I be called surname of my grandparents. <

Вообще непонятно, что ты этим хотела сказать.

>my ambitions and plant for the future<

Plant - в смысле "завод"? Или "растение"?

>like layer<

Быть как слой? What do you mean by that?

Вердикт: ужоснах!

2. a little beautiful village
3. a mum and a dad
5. I'm keen on different music.. and other styles. But most of all I like the Beatles.
them не подходит, т. к. относится к стилям, а Битлз - группа.
6. I like writing and reading poems. Also, I like reading...
7. I like watching football...
9. When I was a little girl and lived with my grandparents I was always called by the surname of my drandparents instead of my surname.
10. ..plans for the future
11. ..like lawyer

I’ve been asked to tell you about myself.
So, I live in THE Ukraine in A little beautiful village Zgurivka. I like my country and my village very much.
I have A mum and A dad. I love them.
I like animals very much. I have three dogs.
I’m keen ON different music. Rock, pop, rap, classic and other stYles. But most of them, I like The Beatles. I think, they are eternal.
I like TO write and read poems. I Also like TO read Lori Foster, Irina Metelizia, Michailo Bulhakov, Irena Karpa and otherS.
I like watchING football matches on TV.
Ok, now some MORE INFORMATION ON me.
When I was a little girl and liveD with my grandparents I USED TO CALL MY GRANDPARENTS SURNAME INSTEAD OF MINE.
IN CONCLUSION I WOULD LIKE TO TELL ABOUT my ambitions and planS for the future.
I think I’d like to be A KIND OF laWyer, psychologist or art designer.

ОШИБКИ ВЫДЕЛЕНЫ CAPS LOCK. Украина - исключение, употребляется с артиклем.

я сильно не вникала в текст но в глаза бросилась ошибка, в английском не пишется два глагола рядом между ними объязательно должен быть хотя бы артикль, как в вашем случае like write and like watch надо писать like to write and like to watch and like to read и так далее

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