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Often I get up at 9.30. Some time I just stay at bed and after that I went clean my teeth and wash my face. Then I go to kitchen and make brekfast for me. After that I dressed and went to the institute.
My classes begin at 12.10 and finish at 6 or 7 p.m. When classes are over I go home. I eat lunch and went to the city or stay at home. This time I spent on drawing, listening music, reading book, singing, cleaning home or watching films. Closer to the evening I start do my homework. After this I used to talk on the telephone with my parents and friends. Then I have lunch and go the shower. I haven`t specific time to go to bed so I can`t say time when I go sleep.
Tin Tim
Tin Tim
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Normaly I get up at 9.30am. Sometimes I stay in bed, then brush my teeth and wash my face, Then I go to kitchen and make my breakfast, after that i get dressed and go to institute.
My classes start at 12:10pm and finish at 6 or 7pm. When classes are over I go back home. I have lunch and either go out or stay home. This time I dedicated my evening to drawing, listening to the music, reading a book, singing, cleaning my place and watching films. Then i did my homework and talked to my parents and friends on phone.Later I had lunch and took shower. I have no specific time to go to bed, so I can not define it.
Саидхуча Давлатзода
Саидхуча Давлатзода
121
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Often I get up at 9.30. Some time I just stay in bed and after that I (go to) clean my teeth and wash my face. Then I go to the kitchen and cook brekfast for myself. After that I dress and go to the Institute.
My classes begin at 12.10 and finish at 6 or 7 p.m. When classes are over I go home. I eat lunch and go out or stay at home. During this time I draw, listen to the music, read books, sing, clean my room/flat or watch films. Later in the evening I start to do my homework. Then I usually talk with my parents and friends on the telephone. Then I have supper and go the shower. I haven`t specific time to go to bed so I can`t say time when I go to sleep.
Александр Кравцов
Александр Кравцов
20 884
in bed, I go to clean, get dress, go to the University. spend, listening to music, books,/ a book, start to do my homework, I talk, (зачем used to?), when I go to sleep
Елена Быкова
Елена Быкова
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