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What conditions did you live in when you were a child?
I've written down all his remarks concerning this question.
If you had taken these medicines yesterday you would feel much better today.
The girls looked upset when they were told about their mother's disease.
Let the children walk barefooted, it will do no harm.
All sick people are the same: they get nervous about trifles and behave like children.

1. In which conditions did you live, when you were a child?
2. Regarding this matter, I noted (wrote) all his comments.
3. If you took these pills yesterday, you would feel much more better today.
4. Girls looked unhappy when they were told about Mother`s disease
5. Let kids to run shoeless, it won`t harm them.
6. All sick people are same: get nervous for nothing and act like kids.

) You lived in what conditions, when were the child?
2) I have written down its remarks on this question.
3) If you have accepted yesterday these tablets, you today would feel yourself much better.
4) At girls was an unfortunate kind when it have told about illness of their mother.
5) Allow children to run about barefoot, it will not cause them harm
6) All patients are identical: are nervous on trifles and behave as children.
( НУ вроде так )

1)In what comditions did you live when you were a child?
2)I have written down all his remarks on this questoin.
3)If you had taken these pills yesterday, you would feel much better today.
4)Girls looked unhappy when they were told about their mother's desease.
5)Let children run about barefooted, it won't do any harm.
6)All people are the same: they are nervous of trifles and behave like children.
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1) When you were child, what conditions did you live in?
2) не its, а his
4) Girls looked miserable when were told about their mothers deasease
5)... no harm

не ручаюсь правда за стопроцентную правильность :)

молодица тогда уж