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favorite serial IS "Daddy's daughters"
предложение It's set in Moscow лучше убрать, оно не нужно, ты об этом уже сказала
After all it is a comedy - и это тоже лучше убрать
а предпоследнее предложение немного некорректное

I like to watch TV. I like watching feature films and series best of all. It's a kind of entertainment for me. My favorite series is Daddy's daughters, it's a comedy about Moscow large family. It's set in Moscow. The story line is very interesting. I like all actors but most of all the actress acting Dasha-Anastasija Sivaeva. It's broadcast 3 times a day, starting at 7:00 PM (можно и 19:00) . If I'm not in a good mood I see this series and my mood gets better. After all it is a comedy.

Сериал по-английски - series или soap-opera, но никак не serial.
Я правил текст исключительно с точки зрения орфографических и грамматических ошибок.

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My favorite serial IS "Daddy's daughters" it's a comedy serial about(без the ) Moscow

the story line IS very interesting

I like all actors ("Я" всегда с большой буквы)

at 19 evening - at 9 in the evening

вроде все правильно

I like watching feature films
an entertainment
my favourite serials is...
a large family that lives in Moscow
the story line is very interesting
most of all the actress in the role of Dasha
if I am in a bad mood, I watch this serial and I am up again