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"Hello! My name is Svetlana! I live In Russia. I very love to sing. I sing mostly in English language. Dear native speakers of English language (USA, United Kingdom, Ireland) - I'm looking for among you permanent collaborators, I am looking for such people, who will help me to correct mistakes and explain to me why it is impossible so to speak/write. Also I would like to find among you, poets, to help in the writing new lyrics for the existing songs. I need to translate texts from French into English. I will be grateful to everyone who responds and would gladly add in friends!"



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Vavilina.1961
Vavilina.1961
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"Hello! My name is Svetlana! I am from Russia. I am fond of singing. Mainly I
sing songs in English. Dear native speakers of the English
language (USA, United Kingdom, Ireland) - I'm looking for
permanent collaborators among you, I am looking for such people, who will help me
in correcting mistakes and at the same time will explain to me why is it impossible to
speak or write that way. Also I would like to find poets among you, who will help me in
writing new lyrics to the existing songs. I also need to translate texts
from French into English. I will be grateful to everyone who responds
and would gladly add to friends!"
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Юрий Романенков
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Vavilina.1961 Спасибо!
I love to sing very much! in the English language
I'm looking for permanent collaborators among you, I am looking for such people, who will help me to correct my mistakes and explain me why it is impossible to speak/write in such way. I also would like to find poets among you to help writing new lyrics of the existing songs.
Как-то эгоистично все написано! Мне надо надо надо!! ! А ты им что взамен?
Коробов Дмитрий
Коробов Дмитрий
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Vavilina.1961 Во-первых не ты, а Вы. А во-вторых сам проект подразумевает бесплатную помощь. Благодарю Вас.
"Hello! My name is Svetlana! I live In Russia. I'm fond of singing. I sing mostly in English language. Dear native speakers of English language (USA, United Kingdom, Ireland) - I'm looking among you for permanent collaborators, I am looking for such people, who will help me to correct mistakes and explain me why it is impossible to speak/write so. Also I would like to find among you poets to help me writing new lyrics for the existing songs. I need to translate texts from French into English. I will be grateful to everyone who responds and would gladly add this person to my friends!"
Нонна Юсупова
Нонна Юсупова
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