Друзья, знающие хорошо АНГЛИЙСКИЙ, помогите откорректировать письмо, которое мне срочно нужно отправить в университет!

I would like to inform you about the arrival of the official TOEFL score. This is the only document required. The problem

is that the official proof didn't arrive yet. I've sent you the printed copy. I wasn't informed that the deadline to take

all the documents is ending up on July 30. I was sure that the TOEFL certificate is going to arrive in some days and I

would as soon as it will arrive I was going to send it up to you via DHL. But in order not to miss the deadline we have

ordered an additional score report, which will come directly to your office. But unfortunately, we were notified, that it

will arrive in seven-ten days. If it is possible, please, could you accept my application for the consideration, despite

the fact that the oficial TOEFL score certificate is going to arrive after the deadline.

Also, I wanted to inform you, that since July 3, 2011 I became a permanent canadian resident.Soon I'm going to leave the university in Azerbaijan (I'm a third year student and my major is World economy) and move to Toronto, Canada, so I can't imagine myself without studying at the university and improving myself in differen ways. This is the reason why I really need to get an admission from your university. I am keen to study on the Finance undergraduate programm and I'm looking forward your positive.

answer.

Thank you for your consideration!