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The academy of Public administration of Great Britain ...
The Academy of Public Administration of Great Britain ...

Education in the Academy includes five Master’s program majors “Public and Local Administration», “Law”, “International Relations”, “Translation”, “Public Policy”,. Moreover, we offer three PhD programs: “Public and Local Administration”, “Social Work” and “Economics”.

...includes five Master study programs: Public and Local Administration; Law; International Relations; Translation and Public Policy. (обратите внимание на кавычки, у меня их нет)

Moreover, we offer three PhD programs: “Public and Local Administration”, “Social Work” and “Economics”.

Moreover, we offer a three-year PhD programs: Public and Local Administration; Social Work and Economics.

... is to ensure that the Educational process ...
... is to ensure that the educational process ...(educational - с маленькой буквы)

In the regard,

обратите внимание, что in/with regard TO (именно TO)
Idioms:
as regards = concerning.
in/with regard to = with respect to.

теперь: the Academy would like to acquire access to the “IRBIS” database on specified subjects and receive a detailed explanation on the conditions of the access, as well as the cost of the service. - я не понимаю эту идею! Академия хотела бы получить доступ к базе данных ...и получить подробные разъяснения ...Может она предоставляет? Извините, не понимаю и не понимаю все вместе с "In the regard," даже если "In regard to" ...Вам нужно это пересмотреть (мое мнение)

здесь ошибки нет: We hope for fruitful cooperation.
предлагаю заменить на: We hope for the mutual and fruitful cooperation.
или
We look forward to further fruitful cooperation.

ps: If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me:))

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In the regard = In regard - ибо, так как, потому что, вследствие того что