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...but America does not end WITH Hollywood and Disneyland.
In America, there live kind, sociable, funny, honest people.
There live (no "s"!) more than 460 million people there
The flag consists of red and white stripes, and of 50 stars on a blue background in the upper right corner .
State of -?? the United States of America is located in North America - лучше просто: The USA is located
Washed by the waters of the Pacific Ocean to the west and the Atlantic Ocean to the east. - Отсутствует подлежащее. Нужно: It is washed....from the west and the....from the east.
In the south the U.S. border with Mexico, in the north - with Canada, as well as its sea borders
There are a lot of reserves in America.
There is Zion Canyon, of 24 km length and of 800 meters depth .
There are even more attractions in America

тут действительно ничего не понятно.. .

What is America? This is the Statue of Liberty, Coca-Cola, Jazz, hot dogs, baseball, country houses, big cars, but America does not end WITH Hollywood and Disneyland. People who live in America are open-hearted, sociable, аnd honest. They are always ready to help. America's population is approximately 460 million. USA has 50 states. The stars on the flag of America represent the number of states. The red and white stripes on the flag syblolize the initial number of states. United States of America are located in North America. Its territory is limited by the waters of the Pacific Ocean on the West and the Atlantic Ocean on the East. The U.S. share the southern border with Mexico, northern with Canada. It also has a sea border with Russia. The capital of America is Washington. In America, there are a lot of reserves. Here are some of them:
Redwood National Park, California. The park itself is an ancient redwoods forest.
Zion National Park in Utah which is a large canyon called the Zion Canyon. Its length is 24 km and its depth is 800 meters.
National Park Petrified Forest is located in eastern Arizona. On its territory you can see lots of fossils dating back to two hundred million years b.c.
Park, Grand Canyon, Arizona. This is one of the oldest national parks in the United States. In this park you can see the Grand Canyon of the Colorado River, one of the most famous natural wonders of the world. It is also one of the deepest canyons in the world.
In America, there are a lot more places of attraction.

Честно.. .это просто ад =) хуже гугл транслейта. Моя версия в принципе столь же плоха сколь и исходник =) но когда я это понял было уже поздно. =) тут еще примерно миллион ошибок, не говоря, уже о логике и названиях...

Здесь не ошибок.

Мдааа я тут нечего не пойму