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my favorite place to travel....
I always wanted to travel around the world. If there was such possibility, I would have chosen Australia.
Australia is a large continent. She lies between the Indian and Pacific Oceans. Australia’s area is about 8000000 squares km. Today Australia is an independent federative state. There are five big cities in Australia: Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide, Perth and Brisbane. The official language is English. The capital of the country is Canberra. It is a quiet city. .
Australia is an important producer and exporter of primary products: wool, meat, sugar, fruit, coal, iron, copper, lead, gold and so on.
The most famous animals of this country is kangaroos, koalas, wallabies. Australian climate is dry and warm.

The national holiday, Australia Day, is now celebrated on or near January 26thю. The New Year is at mile summer, midwinter is in June.

Is for me, Sydney is the most attractive city
Sydney is the oldest and industrial city. It was founded in 1788. About 3 million people now live in the city. The Sydney’s Opera House and the hardboard bridge are symbols of Australia. Sydney is a general eulogized fashion center. I want to visit Sydney’s fashion shows. On arrival in Australia I would like to stay in a five-star-hotel. And I want on en suite rooms with all possible facilities: TV, mini-bar, telephone and other things. I hope that in future I will be able to visit Australia