Проверьте, пожалуйста, вот это сочинение

А как по мне, так не особо то и корявое. Вполне себе!

GREENWAY HALT
If you are interested in visiting Greenway House and Garden, you can arrive THERE by steam train OR shuttle bus (should you prefer not to walk)! Greenway Halt is a brand new station and it is very famous. What should you do to get there? Just board a steam train at Paignton or Kingswear and catch the bus connection at Churston or at the Halt!
Greenway House and Garden LOCATED on the bank of the beautiful River Dart with simply stunning view ARE run by The National Trust (тут полностью поменяла, но не уверена какой там смысл изначально был). The National Trust cares for one of the world's largest and most significant holdings of art and heritage. No other organization conserves such a range of buildings, collections, gardens and settings intact, nor provides such extensive public access. You will enjoy special collections, displays and ever-changing exhibitions!
Do you want more facts? I will tell you! Formerly the holiday home of Agatha Christie and her family, Greenway House holds the family collection of the famous author. I hope you will really like it. The second fact is AS FOLLOWS: gardens are home to over 2,700 species of trees and woody plants, which are just waiting to be discovered. 2,700 speciMENS (SPECIES для животных) of trees and woody plants! Can you imagine?
Therefore, if you go to London, you must visit the Greenway Halt. It doesn't matter whether you're a child or an adult, you'll love this place.
Step back in time to the 1950’s when steam trains were the ONLY way to travel…