English. Please, correct my mistakes!

I usually go to the shop on the weekend. I usually buy two bottles of bear and two kilo of shrimps. I don't go to the market because I don't need there anything. All of I need it is cigarettes, bear and shrimps.
I think that our shops are very poor. I don't like to go there. I like to go to "Ashan". There is a lot of commodities. And you may choose what to want.
Last time I went to "Atak". I went there last Sunday. I bought two bottles of bear and two packing of shrimps. The shop is located far of my home that is why I had to go there by my car.

Thanks you a lot!

There is nothing to correct. It should be rewritten. Totally.
Ты хоть слово "пиво" - beer - научись грамотно по-английски писать. И отличать его от "bear" - медведь. Я смотрю с ним у всех здешних "знатоков английского" большие проблемы...

I usually go shopping on weekends. I usually buy two bottleS of beer and two kiloS of shrimps. I don't go to the (farmer's) market because I don't need anything THERE (обстоятельство в конец) . All I need Is cigarettes (Битлз вспомните, All you need is love...), beer and shrimps.
I think that our shops (stores) are very poor. I don't like to go there. I like to go to Ashan. There is (it offers) a lot of commodities (there). And you CAN (речь идет не о разрешении, а о физической возможности) chose what you want.
Last time I went to Atak. I went there last Sunday. I bought two bottleS of beer and two packingS of shrimps. The shop is A LONG WAY (так в утвердительных предложениях) from my home that is why I had to go there by car (to drive there).

Не так все страшно)

8 предложение точно не правильно, 9 вроде тоже

Dude, that's halluva way to study a language.You're spending days and days here with your questions- is that what you guys call "self-learning"?Ya no mames!!!

I usually go shopping on weekends. I buy two bottles of bear and two kilos of shrimps. I don't go to the market because I don't need there anything. All I need is cigarettes, bear and shrimps.
I think that our shops are very poor. I don't like to go there. I like to go to the hypermarket "Ashan". There are a lot of commodities there. And you may chose what you want. (And one can choose anything to one's taste).
Last time I went to Atak. I went there last Sunday. I bought two bottles of beer and two packings of shrimps. The shop is located far from my home that is why I had to go there by car.