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That’s time to kill your loneliness!!!!
Do you know this legend that all people were created as couples and man and woman were not separated and they enjoined every minute with each other? Unfortunately God separated these couples and since those times we are looking for our second half. Some people are really lucky and they easily get their partners for love and life together but some people trying to find their soul mates during all their life. We are working, traveling, visiting theatres, walking and always thinking where is he\she? Sometimes we can not get an answer for this question. And who knows where is our soul mate living…may be closed to us or may be on another continent…
Have you ever felt that your heart beats so fast and you can not control everything? Have you ever felt this weird feeling deep inside your stomach and have you ever felt that it is so hard to breath? Yes, all these things happen to us when we are in love with someone, with someone we really adore…Are you ready for the feeling of love? Are you ready to take a care for someone?
Sometimes we do not believe marvel can happen to us and we can find our soul mate but who knows…may be YOU will meet her\him in the central park…or in the club…or you will get your soul mate through internet. Impossible is nothing! For example my bosom friend Olga was so suffering after divorce with her hubby. But once she visited me and her eyes were shining from love because she met her love!!! She met him trough online dating site and they are the happiest couple I have ever seen.
So don’t waste your time sitting in the lonely room with empty heart and thinking that the life is so cruel and fierce. Go outside or create your profile on online dating site and who knows may be you will be a lucky one as my friend Olga. Anyway you can meet a lot of friends, interesting extraordinary persons or just good pen pals! Do not miss a chance to get a true love and serious relationship because we never know where we can get happiness!!! Somewhere living your charming soul mate that will give you a lot of love and caring that will be your calm angel or may be spontaneous and adventures person or just a simple person who will always understand you and will keep a warm atmosphere around you.
Regretfully life is too short to spend it alone with no one person who loves you…THAT’S TIME TO KILL YOUR LONELINESS!!!!
Here is a great online dating site, the site where my best friend met her LOVE by the way http://yoursoulmate.com
GOOD LUCK!!!!
Лингвистика
Господа лингвисты!! ! Your help is needed!!!
It’s time to kill your loneliness!!!!
Have you heard the legend telling that once upon a time all people were created as belonging to one another and men and women were never pulled apart enjoying each minute spent together? Unfortunately, God separated these couples and since then people have been looking for their better half. Some are really lucky and easily find the love of their life, though others spend eternity looking for their soulmates in vain. We work, travel, go to the theatre, take walks and constantly puzzle over the question: 'Where is he/she?'. Every so often the answer's a silence. Who knows where our match could be - either next door or overseas...
Have you ever felt your heart pounding so fast that you almost lose control? Have you ever felt this strange feeling deep inside your stomach and have you ever felt that it is so hard to breath? Yes, all these things happen to us when we are in love with someone, with a person we really adore…Are you ready for the feeling of love? Are you ready to care for the one who makes your heart beat faster?
Sometimes we don't believe miracles can come our way and we will eventually find our soulmate, but who knows… May be YOU will encounter her\him in a central park…or in a club… or you will get in touch with your love in the Net. Everything is possible! My bosom friend Olga, for instance, was deeply suffering after the divorce with her hubby, but, once she visited me, her eyes began to shine with happiness, for she had met her new love! She met him via an online dating site and since then they have been the most blissful couple I have ever seen in my life.
So don’t waste your time sitting alone in a dark room with your heart shattered thinking that your life is so cruel and unjust. Spend some time outdoors or create your profile on an online dating site and who knows - perhaps luck will come your way, as in the case of Olga. Anyway, you are bound to meet a lot of friends, interesting and extraordinary people or just pleasant pen pals! Don't miss a chance to find a true love and establish a serious relationship - we never know where our true happiness hides!!! It could be a beautiful charming soul mate who would care for you as a real guardian angel, or a spontaneous and adventurous person, or just an unpretentious one who would always understand you and create an atmosphere of warmth and affection.
Regrettably, life is to short to throw it down the drain living in utter loneliness without a shoulder to cry on. IT'S HIGH TIME YOU GOT RID OF YOUR LONELINESS!!!
Here is one great online dating site, the site where my best friend met her love, by the way: http://yoursoulmate.com
GOOD LUCK!!!!
Have you heard the legend telling that once upon a time all people were created as belonging to one another and men and women were never pulled apart enjoying each minute spent together? Unfortunately, God separated these couples and since then people have been looking for their better half. Some are really lucky and easily find the love of their life, though others spend eternity looking for their soulmates in vain. We work, travel, go to the theatre, take walks and constantly puzzle over the question: 'Where is he/she?'. Every so often the answer's a silence. Who knows where our match could be - either next door or overseas...
Have you ever felt your heart pounding so fast that you almost lose control? Have you ever felt this strange feeling deep inside your stomach and have you ever felt that it is so hard to breath? Yes, all these things happen to us when we are in love with someone, with a person we really adore…Are you ready for the feeling of love? Are you ready to care for the one who makes your heart beat faster?
Sometimes we don't believe miracles can come our way and we will eventually find our soulmate, but who knows… May be YOU will encounter her\him in a central park…or in a club… or you will get in touch with your love in the Net. Everything is possible! My bosom friend Olga, for instance, was deeply suffering after the divorce with her hubby, but, once she visited me, her eyes began to shine with happiness, for she had met her new love! She met him via an online dating site and since then they have been the most blissful couple I have ever seen in my life.
So don’t waste your time sitting alone in a dark room with your heart shattered thinking that your life is so cruel and unjust. Spend some time outdoors or create your profile on an online dating site and who knows - perhaps luck will come your way, as in the case of Olga. Anyway, you are bound to meet a lot of friends, interesting and extraordinary people or just pleasant pen pals! Don't miss a chance to find a true love and establish a serious relationship - we never know where our true happiness hides!!! It could be a beautiful charming soul mate who would care for you as a real guardian angel, or a spontaneous and adventurous person, or just an unpretentious one who would always understand you and create an atmosphere of warmth and affection.
Regrettably, life is to short to throw it down the drain living in utter loneliness without a shoulder to cry on. IT'S HIGH TIME YOU GOT RID OF YOUR LONELINESS!!!
Here is one great online dating site, the site where my best friend met her love, by the way: http://yoursoulmate.com
GOOD LUCK!!!!
Chara Bogira
Это круто )))))))))))) THANK YOU !!!
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только вот статья - для рекламы? статья скорее для тех, кто не подозревает, что есть такой способ знакомства, как такие сайты.
Непонятно:
1. В самом начале: Unfortunately God separated these couples... по-моему, было бы логичней посвятить оегенде на одно предложение больше, чтоб пояснить, что он их не просто так разделил, а из-за какого-то греха, точно уже не помню)
2. Have you ever felt this weird feeling deep inside your stomach - при чем тут желудок? Heart is located in the chest)
только вот статья - для рекламы? статья скорее для тех, кто не подозревает, что есть такой способ знакомства, как такие сайты.
Непонятно:
1. В самом начале: Unfortunately God separated these couples... по-моему, было бы логичней посвятить оегенде на одно предложение больше, чтоб пояснить, что он их не просто так разделил, а из-за какого-то греха, точно уже не помню)
2. Have you ever felt this weird feeling deep inside your stomach - при чем тут желудок? Heart is located in the chest)
Любовь Андросова
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Unfortunately God separated... -Unfortunately, (,) God separated...
Some people are really lucky and they easily get their partners for love - Some people are really lucky and they CAN easily FIND their LOVES.
...but some people trying to find their soul mates - but some people try to find their soul mates
We are working, traveling, visiting theaters, walking and always thinking where is he\she? - We work, travel, visit theaters, walk wondering where he\she IS?
Sometimes we can not get an answer for this question. - Sometimes we can not FIND an answer for this question.
And who knows where is our soul mate living…may be closed to us or may be on another continent… - And who knows where our soul mate MIGHT LIVE…
you will be a lucky one as my friend Olga - you will be a lucky one LIKE my friend Olga
Anyway you can meet a lot of friends - Anyway, (,) you can meet a lot of friends/or even better - In any case you can meet a lot of friends
Regretfully life is too short to spend it alone with no one person who loves you… - Unfortunately, life is too short to be spent in loneliness with no one beside you…
Some people are really lucky and they easily get their partners for love - Some people are really lucky and they CAN easily FIND their LOVES.
...but some people trying to find their soul mates - but some people try to find their soul mates
We are working, traveling, visiting theaters, walking and always thinking where is he\she? - We work, travel, visit theaters, walk wondering where he\she IS?
Sometimes we can not get an answer for this question. - Sometimes we can not FIND an answer for this question.
And who knows where is our soul mate living…may be closed to us or may be on another continent… - And who knows where our soul mate MIGHT LIVE…
you will be a lucky one as my friend Olga - you will be a lucky one LIKE my friend Olga
Anyway you can meet a lot of friends - Anyway, (,) you can meet a lot of friends/or even better - In any case you can meet a lot of friends
Regretfully life is too short to spend it alone with no one person who loves you… - Unfortunately, life is too short to be spent in loneliness with no one beside you…
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