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I think the positive feature of the hippie subculture is their desire to make the world better.
Having joined these positive characteristics I've made up a new subculture which doesn't protest agains parents and society.

"I think a hippie subculture positive feature is that they want to make the world a better place"
"Connect these positive characteristics, I got a new subculture that is not protesting against the parents and society "

"To my mind at subculture hippie a positive line is that they want to do the world better", and "Connecting these positive descriptions, new subculture which does not object against parents and society turned out for me"

To my mind at subculture hippie a positive line is that they want to do the world better
Connecting these positive descriptions, new subculture which does not object against parents and society turned out for me

Вступление может быть следующим: To my mind...; I believe; In my opinion, I think...
To my mind the positive feature of hippie's subculture is that they want to make the world better.
Having joined these features I've got a new subculture which doesn't object to parents and society.

I hold the view that one obvious advantage of the hippie culture is their desire to make the world a better place.
Having combined these positive features, I have come up with a brand new subculture which does not fly in the face of parents and society.

I think that subculture of hippi has a positive trait.They try to make our world better.

Connected these two positive traits, i had a new subc. which doesn~t object about parents and society.

In my opinion at subculture of hippie positive feature is that they wish to make the world лучше-Having connected these positive characteristics, at me the new subculture which does not protest against parents and a society has turned out

In my opinion the positiv point (trait) of the hippy subculture is the fact that they want to make the worl better.

As i combined these positiv traits i have got a new subculture which is not in opposition to the parents and the society .

I think a hippie subculture positive feature is that they want to make the world a better place ", and" connect these positive characteristics, I got a new subculture that is not protesting against the parents and society "