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This book is a compilation of lectures, satsangs, thoughts on various topics as follows: meditation, inner being, spiritual growth, Jesus Christ and so on
My favourite parts are about the personality of Jesus Christ
Author take a look on the figure of Jesus from the different perspectives through quoting and clarifying excerpts from the Holy Scripture
Here we have new aspects of view on the acts of Jesus and his words
Through Giten's explanations Jesus take the more human and more understandable form
The rest of the book narrates on issues like inner man and woman, connections between meditation, relationships and creativity, chakras and their influence on human life, Love, unity of life, dissolution into the Whole and many others
The lectures have some kind of repetitive tendencies, it was weird sometimes to read the same idea several times during the reading, but maybe it is not about repetition, but about accentuation
I had several unsuccessful mediation experiences, I had a glimpses of silence for the fractions of a second, but then the thought "Yes, it is" broke in and the moment went away and it was me again sitting with close eyes and getting bored
This book ignite the spark inside of me to try again and again
Good book for beginners to know what beyond the barriers of personality is and to make an aim to break through these barriers
~ Катюша ~
~ Катюша ~
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This book is a compilation of lectures, satsangs, thoughts on various topics as follows: meditation, inner being, spiritual growth, Jesus Christ and so on
My favourite parts are about the personality of Jesus Christ.
THE Author takeS a look AT the figure of Jesus from A different PERSPECTIVE BY quoting and clarifying excerpts from the Holy Scripture.
Here we ARE GIVEN A NEW POINT of view on the acts of Jesus and his words.
Through Giten's explanations Jesus takeS A more human and more understandable form.
The rest of the book TACKLES issues like: THE inner man and woman, connections between meditation, relationships and creativity, chakras and their influence on human life, Love, unity of life, dissolution into the Whole and many others.
The lectures SOMEHOW TENDED TO BE REPETITIVE, AND IT was SOMETIMES weird to read the same idea REPEATED several times, but maybe it's not about repetition, but about accentuation AFTER ALL.
I had several INSTANCES OF unsuccessful mediation, DURING WHICH I had glimpses of silence for MERE fractions of A second, but then the thought "Yes, it is" WOULD BREAK in, the moment SLIP away, and HERE I WAS, sitting with MY eyes SHUT and getting bored.
This book igniteD the spark inside me AND INSPIRED ME to try again and again.
THIS IS A good book for beginners WHO WANT TO know what LIES beyond the barriers of personality and ARE INTENT ON BREAKING through these barriers.
Прохор Козлов
Прохор Козлов
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~ Катюша ~ Спасибо, Артем, Огромное
Хотел пошутить, что расту потихоньку, потом увидел, какие детские ошибки и шутить перехотелось
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~ Катюша ~ Не, спасибо