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Помогите пожалуйста проверить ошибки в тексте, т.к. я плохо знаю английский!!!!

My perfect friend!
My perfect friend I see a girl about my age. Unfortunately, I have no best friend, but I hope that in time it appears.
So, my ideal girlfriend:
1) It takes me for who I am. She likes me with all faults and virtues.
2)Honest and genuine. She would always tell me the truth, and will not use me for a private purpose.
3)In any situation will support me. Ideal girlfriend always find time to help me in difficult situation.
4) It always with me is mutual. If I invite her to take a walk, then she, too, would invite me.
5) She doesn't criticize me. From a friend I never hear criticism, only good advice.
6) Understanding. She will never force me to choose between a guy and his girlfriend.
Людмила Горн
Людмила Горн
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3) HE OR SHE will support me N ANY SITUATION. MY Ideal friend WIILL always find time to help me in A difficult situation.

И т.д. girlfriend - это обычно подружка, возлюбленная для мальчика.
АМ
Азиза Мирзахметова
64 037
Лучший ответ
вот тебе американский вариант:
The Marks Of A True Friend

1. Always is the same each time you meet.
2. Desires the best for your life.
3. Does not encourage you to evil pursuits.
4. Enjoys with you personal successes and
pleasures.
5. Comforts you in your time of need.
6. Allows you to have other friends. Does not
monopolize you or becomes a clinger.
7. Does not criticize you in the presence of others.
8. Lovingly tells you your faults.
9. Believes in you but does not always agree with
you.
10. Allows you to develop.
11. Does not ask you to withhold your opinion
even when it is a counter opinion.
12. Does not ask you to compromise your
convictions.
13. Defends you against unjust criticism.
14. Will not use you and then forsake you.
15. Will not believe the story that you have failed without supporting facts. When the evidence is conclusive that you have failed, a fiend will seek to help you rebuild your life.
SН
S.t.a.l.k.e.r. Наёмник
70 736
Довольно хороший текст, несмотря на мелкие огрехи.
4) Русский и английский варианты как-то не увязываются. Может, Everything among us is mutual?
6) To choose between guy and his girlfriend. Для меня звучит как-то замысловато. Впрочем, это скорее всего моя проблема.
ОК
Оксана Конакбаева
94 899
Не употребляй слово girlfriend. В современном английском это слово имеет вполне определённое значения. Если девочка называет так другую девочку, то они состоят в неких э-э-э.. . противоестественных отношениях.
Юлия Карлова
Юлия Карлова
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