Денис Зайцев
Денис Зайцев

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In 2006, I and my parents went to celebrate the new year to the country. This was a holiday where everything went wrong. First, there was a heavy snowfall and we are very long to go through the gate, because it was filled up with snow. Second, the parents forgot to take my Christmas gift to the country Thirdly, I am terribly sick and spent every holiday with fever and runny nose.

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Дарья Пашнина

In 2006, I and my parents went to celebrate the New Year to
the country. That was the holiday when everything went wrong.
Firstly, there was a heavy snowfall and we had very long to go
through the gate, because it was filled up with snow. Secondly,
my parents forgot to take my Christmas gift to the country.
Thirdly, I fell terribly ill and spent the whole holiday with fever
and runny nose.

Дима Данилов
Дима Данилов

In 2006 my parents and I went to celebrate New Year's Eve to the country.
This was a holiday where everything went wrong.
Firstly there was a heavy snowfall and we were going to the gate for a long time because the path was covered with snow.
Secondly I found my parents had forgotten to bring my Christmas gift to the country.
Thirdly, I was terribly sick and I had to spend my holidays with fever and runny nose.

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