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Hello my good!

My name is
Svetlana. I'm 35. I am from Russia. I live in the city of
Vologda.

I've
been learning English. My native languages are: Russian

I am fond of singing. Mainly I sing
songs in English. Dear native speakers of the English (USA, United Kingdom, Ireland, Canada) - I'm
looking for permanent collaborators among you, I am looking
for such people, who will help me in
correcting mistakes and at the same time will explain to me why is it
impossible to speak or write that
way. Also I would like to find poets among you, who will help me in writing new lyrics to the existing
songs. I also need to translate texts from
French into English. I will be grateful to everyone who responds 
and would gladly add to friends!

Regarding relationship
with men, I am looking for a soul-mate, preferably
my own age (plus or minus 5 years) and an English-speaker. Let him be a
European. And I look forward to meeting my real match but I won't go for brief
frivolous flings. I have two kids. I have no communication with my
kids' father. The boy and the
girl need a good father who will love them as if they were his own children. I have two
dogs. It is important for me that my life partner loves animals, too. I wish the communication with a man were thoughtful and not bringing me
the pain and suffering. I am ready to talk openly with a man about myself and
my life. I always say only what I feel. I'll try to give my man all he needs in
our relationship. That's what will help us to become closer to each other. I
think we need to communicate with a man for as long as needed for developing
meaningful and monogamous relationship".

The respectable men,
let's talk about the proper demeanor.

It doesn't matter how
old you are and what your nationality is, I'm not interested in a one-night
stand with you! I'm not going to react to this type of message. Don't even try to have a talk to me about sex, because it is
a disagreeable to me. I am not interested in an idle talk too. I hope you
understand me in a proper way. If you do not - I will send you to a spam list!

Немного не хорошо текст скопировался, первую часть можно выпусть. Вторая часть начинается со слов "Regarding relationship"

Jonni · Accepted Answer

Regarding relationship.I am looking for a soul-mate, a man of my own age (plus or minus 5 years) and an English-speaker, preferably an European. I look forward to meeting my real match but I am not interested in short-term relationships. I have two kids. I have no communication with my kids' father. The boy and the
girl need a good father who would love them as if they were his own children. 
I have two dogs and it's important for me that my life partner loves animals too. 
I would like to have a meaningful life-time relationship, which wouldn't bring me pain and suffering.
I am ready to talk openly about myself and my life. I always say only what I feel. I think we need to communicate for as long as needed for developing meaningful and monogamous relationship.
I'll try my best to give my man all he needs in the relationship. I believe this will help us to become closer to each other. 
Я изменил порядок двух предложений, мне кажется так лучше - идет речь о разговоре, не стоит ее разрывать.

The respectable men, let's talk about the proper demeanor.
It doesn't matter how old you are or what your nationality is, I'm not interested at all in a one-night stand! I'm not going to respond to this type of message. Please don't even try to have a sex-talk, because it is a disagreeable to me. I am not interested in an idle talk too. I hope you understand me the right way. If you don't - I will send your message to a spam list!
Согласен с Excelsior, последний абзац получился довольно резким, я попытался как мог его смягчить.

Лис !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! · Answer

I am looking for a soul-mate, preferably a European ofmy own age (plus or minus 5 years), and an English-speaker.

I am looking forward to meeting my real match, and not interested in short-term relationships.

I have two kids. I have no communication with their father. The boy and the
girl need a good father who would love them as if they were his own children.

I have two dogs. It is important for me that my life partner loves animals, too.

I wish to have a meaningful life-time relationship, which wouldn't bring me pain and suffering.

I am ready to talk openly with about myself and my life. I always say only what I feel.

I'll do my best to give my man all he needs in our relationship. I would like us to become as close to each other as humanly possible.

I think we need to communicate with a man for as long as needed for developingmeaningful and monogamous relationship. МНЕ НЕ НРАВИТСЯ ЭТО ПРЕДЛОЖЕНИЕ, НО Я НЕ УВЕРЕН, ЧТО С НИМ ДЕЛАТЬ. ЧТО ВЫ ХОТЕЛИ СКАЗАТЬ? А ВСЁ ПОСЛЕДУЮЩЕЕ Я БЫ ВООБЩЕ ВЫБРОСИЛ. ОНО СЛИШКОМ АГРЕССИВНО И ОТПУГНЕТ В ТОМ ЧИСЛЕ И ТЕХ, КОГО ВЫ ХОТИТЕ ПРИВЛЕЧЬ.

The respectable men,let's talk about the proper demeanor.It doesn't matter howold you are and what your nationality is, I'm not interested in a one-nightstand with you! I'm not going to react to this type of message. Don't even try to have a talk to me about sex, because it isa disagreeable to me. I am not interested in an idle talk too. I hope youunderstand me in a proper way. If you do not - I will send you to a spam list!