Проверьте пож правильны ли предлож с англ

1) How long HASit been raining? Порядок слов вопросительного предложения
2) Yesterday, when I left home, it was raining. Я бы не сказала, что Ваш вариант совсем уж плох, но в этом случае чаще встречается именно "home"
3) Yesterday the rain HADstopped by 7 o'clock. Действие уже закончилось к определённому моменту в прошлом, поэтому нужен Past Perfect, а не Past Simple
4) I went into the street (I went out). It was cold and damp. It HAD BEEN RAINING heavily all night. Я настаиваю на Past Perfect Continuous в этом случае. Действие длилось какой-то период ( всю ночь) и уже закончилось к тому моменту, как он вышел на улицу, но между этими предложениями есть связь, так как на улице было холодно и сыро именно вследствие дождя.
5) When DID the rain stop yesterday? - I don't remember exatly, but when I dre up to the office, the rain HAD already stopped, and the sun was shining. Past Perfect, а не Present Perfect, так как дождь закончился к прошлому моменту (к тому моменту, когда он приехал к офису) , а не к настоящему.
6) Do you think they will get married? How do you think - руссифицированный вариант. Во второй части, т. е. в придаточном предложении, обязательно прямой порядок слов, так как это косвеный вопрос, а не прямой.
7) только артикль the лишний перед last
8) Абсолютно правильное предложение.
9) When I came, he HAD been working ON his report for 3 hours. Past Perfect Continuous, так как действие длилось 3 часа не к настоящему моменту, а к прошлому.
10)He looked tired. He HAD BEEN WORKING ON his report all day. Если бы не было первого предложения, тогда, безусловно, Past Continuous. Past Perfect Continuous показывает не просто что он работал весь день, он как бы объясняет нам причину его усталости. Почему он выклядел уставшим? - Потому что работал весь день. То есть, он работал весь день К тому моменту, как стал уставшим.
11) ...He had been working ON his report, since I BROUGHT him some new materials. Вся ситуация дана в прошлом, поэтому Present Perfect невозможен. Это предложение как брат близнец предыдущего, с единственной лишь разницей, что там был указан весь период работы, а здесь стартовый момент, то есть, когда он начал работать над докладом, поэтому оно только подтверждает правильность Past Per. Con.в 10) He looks tired. He has been working on his report, since I brought him some new materials. - так выглядело бы предл. , если бы ситуация имела отношение к настоящему времени. Но таже там был бы Past Simple в придаточном.
12) Правильное предложение!!!! ( Why DO you LOOK so tired? лучше было бы, но тем не менее Present Continuous здесь тоже приемлим) В ответе однозначно правильное время, не слушай Иру. Дело в том, что есть Present Perfect Cont. INCLUSIVE и EXCLUSIVE. Так вот последний НЕ включает момент речи (то есть это действие уже закончившиеся) , но зато в отличие от Past Continuous показывает связь с настоящим моментом! Уставший то он сейчас!
13) только предлог поменять надо. (at на on), в остальном безупречно.
14) He decided not to go anywhere until he has finished his report.
15) I won't go anywhere until I finish my work!
16) Абсолютно правильно!

How long has it been raining?
Yesterday the rain had stopped by 7 o’clock
When did the rain stop yesterday? ..when I drew up to the office, the rain had already stopped and the sun was shining.
When I came, he had been working at his report for 3 hours.
He had been working at his report since I’ve brought him some new materials.
Why do you look so tired, Peter?

How long it has IT been raining? It has been raining since 6 o’clock.
Yesterday, when I left the house it was raining.
Yesterday the rain HAD stopped by 7 o’clock.
I came OUT TO at the street (Вообще, если вы пытаетесь сказать, что "Я вышел на улицу" - лучше сказать I went outside). I IT was cold and damp. It was raining heavily all night.
When HAD the rain stopped yesterday? (но лучше спросить When did it stop raining yesterday? or When did the rain stop yesterday?) – I don’t remember exactly, but when I drew up to the office, the rain has already stopped and the sun was shining.
How do you think (лучше спросить What do you think), will they get married?
They were going to get married the last month, but Peter had an accident and they had to remit the wedding.
Yesterday I saw Emmy. She said that she had got married.
When I came, he has been working at ON his report for 3 hours.
Yesterday evening he looked tired. He was working at ON his report all day.
Yesterday evening he looked tired. He had been working at ON his report since I’ve brought him some new materials.
Why are you looking so tired, Peter? – I have been working all day long!
By the time I brought him new materials, he had just finished his work at the report.
He decided to go nowhere, until he has finished his report.
I will go nowhere (тут лучше будет звучать I will not go anywhere.как впрочем и в предыдущем предложении) until I finish my work!
Yesterday by 7 o’clock he had finished his work.

ошибок много.
how long has it been raining?
when i left home (не house)
yesterday the rain had stopped by 7 o`clock
I went out.
When did the rain stop yesterday?- the rain had already stopped
how do you think if they will get married.
when i came he had been working ...
...since I brought him some new..

How long has it...
Yesterday the rain had stopped by...
I came into the street. It was...
When did the rain stop... (...) the rain had alr. stopped.
What do you think about the possibility of their marriage?
to get married last month
... he had been working...
since I had brought
I was working (потому, что если как у тебя, то он всё ещё продолжает работать)
... not to go anywhere until he would have finished...