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We all live on one planet. This planet is our home. We are living here because our ancestors have saved this planet in its present condition. Our children will live here in the future after us, that it’s really great. But let’s stop at one moment, it will be an important moment – it is our future on this planet and future of our descendants as well.

Ну вот как-то так я бы сказала, хотя легче было бы перевести с оригинального русского текста, чем исправлять здесь ошибки, потому что не все мысли четко выражены!

We all live on one planet, and we consider it our home. We still live on the planet because our ancestors took efforts trying to save it in the state we have it now. Our children will live here in the future after we all are gone, I believe it's really nice. But let’s consider the following moment, it's quite a crucial one – we and our descendance, we all are sharing the same future on this beautiful planet!

We all live on one planet we call our home. Thanks to our ancestors the second-hand planet is as good as new, and hopefully our children will live here after we are gone, and that fact makes me extatic. Let's stop for a moment and think about this wonderful planet we motherfuckers of past, present and future share, I mean, it's THE shit!

Мысли выражены не совсем точно. Напиши оргинал на русском, так будет проще.

перепишу только то что не правильно
we live here 'couse our ancestors have saved this planet дальше я вообще мысль не поняла
in future
but let's stop for a moment it will be the impotant moment - дальше опять не понятно что вы хотели сказать