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Видно перевод с он-лайн переводчика:)) ) Попробуй такой... Once I visited a nice zoo, called Limpopo. There were many beautiful animals. Best of all I liked an owl. Its eyes were extraordinary big and kind. I liked a lynx too. It is a big and clever cat. And it does not catch mice. In general the campaign at the zoo was very amazing. It was the best week end on my vocation. P.S. перевод выше очень хороший, сработал профи, но не советую, ато учитель сразу вычислит, что это писал не ты... Удачи!!!

Once I visited a very interesting zoo, called "Limpopo". There were many beautiful animals, but an owl was my favorite because it had big and king eyes. I liked lynx, the big and clever cat, which didn't catch mice, as well. In general, the company of friends in the zoo has liked me. It was the best weekend of my holiday break.
Вот так вот лучше я думаю)

1There have many beautiful animals.
2 лучше напиши Once I was in beatifull ( прекрасном) zoo.
3 it is a big and clever cat
4 At it the big and kind eyes. вот это переделай учитель не поймёт, друг мой ты с чего переводил с переводчика что-ли? У тебя почти в каждом ошибки!

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There are many beautiful animals.I like owl very much it has big and kind eyes. also i like a lynxi.t is the big and clever cat.It is very interesting but it oes not catch micies.generaly i liki going to thr zoo very much