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By 2030 the Internet is supposed to get the virtual means that will be able to influence all human sense organs, for instance, people are expected to catch the smell via Internet. There will be systems providing a complete immersion in the environment as if you are close to nature, on the beach or, for example, in a conference-hall.

Raymond Kurzweil, the American writer, scientist and futurologist, made a prediction according to which all people on the Earth could get immortality. One just has to wait until 2030 to get it. According to Kurzweil's theory by this year people are supposed to have an indefinitely long lifespan, to be able to assimilate information as large as "Peace and War" just in a few minutes and to do without air for a long time. Human sexuality will also undergo considerable changes.

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In 2030 the internet will have virtual facilities which can affect on all organs of human sense: for example, it will be able to feel odors through the internet. There will also be total immersion systems: there is a sense of being outdoor, on a beach, or, for example, in a conference hall.
The american writer, scientist and futurologist Raimond Kurcweil has made a prediction, according this all people of the Earth can become immortal. For this, it must be waited till 2030. As Kurcweil said, after this date people will live unlimitedly long, can assimilate information with capacity of "War and Peace" for a few minutes, can go without air for a long time. The sphere of human sexuality will have great changes.

By 2030 Internet will get virtual resources, effecting on all of the sences of body: ex. you'll be able to smell in Internet.Also there will be systems with absolute imbedding in the environment: you'll feel that man will be in the countryside, on the beach or f.ex. in conference hall. American writer, scientific and futurologist Raymond Kurtswail made a forecast that all population of the Earth will get an immortal. we should wait this until 2030.As Kurtswail says, by this time people will stay alive for unlimited time, will be able to remember a big size of information, (like a "war and peace") and stay a long time without air. Big changes will concern sphere of human sexuality