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Thinking about important and revolutionary inventions MAKES(?) us visualize something material and sophisticated such as the television, the computer, the car, the airplane and so on. Each one of these elements was indeed (very ) revolutionary and brought fundamental changes TO he whole world. Nevertheless, I THINK (BELIEVE) that the most significant creation of mankind is also one of the oldest. It’s( the elaboration of the graphic system of communication:) writing.
Although it may sound a bit disconnected from the idea we have of huge (big, important) technological creations, writing is the basis for almost everything man has invented (oh, is it?). But it has also become so habitual in our lives that we don’t even think about it with more consideration.
Men (sounds extremely sexist - not women? humankind proved to have reached (a very developed) an advanced level of intelligence when we managed to translate (oral words) speech into graphic symbols. It was a step ahead in the history of (men )evolution. We proved to be able to make things more abstract.
The invention of writing brought ABOUT/were followed by a string/sequence of other(s) that were very revolutionary each one at its time. Printing, for instance. It made the old process of writing books by hand totally obsolete. The information was quicker reproduced and spread all over. It was another step (forward into men ) up the ladder of evolutio). A process directed(?) linked to the use of writing.
Nowadays, with the globalization and Internet linking people from all over the world, we may think that THE computer is the most significant creation of modern times. And indeed it may be. But it’s just another step along the road of the development that writing has reached.
Mankind has been improving daily and each day quicker. Maybe in a near future man will come up with a totally new method of communication. But will writing ever be totally banished from civilization?

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