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Люди, знающие английский, пожалуйста, проверьте небольшое сочинение про лето.

This summer I'll remember for a long time. I got a lot of impressions and emotions.
This year I went abroad, first in Estonia. This is a beautiful country. Estonia is very clean and has a small narrow street. And Estonia is famous for its fruit woods. In one of them I have collected a lot of berries and mushrooms for a year.
This summer I also visited Sochi. Dad had a great time in a sanatorium Federal Drug Control Service in Khost. I've been sunbathing, swimming in the Black Sea, and read. It was a wonderful time in my life. And also we went on a trip to Krasnaya Polyana. I also had my beloved grandmother in the village of Forest. There, I helped her with the garden, walking.
And at the end of summer, I stumbled upon a wonderful site for the study of world languages ​​- Iifemocha. It is possible to correspond with people from various countries. I found many new friends and expanded my vocabulary in English. I advise all of this site.
In general impressions of this summer I got plenty. And most importantly, that the positive charge of the whole year ahead.
Gulveri Jorbenadze
Gulveri Jorbenadze
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Estonia is very clean and has a small narrow street (?)
В Эстонии одна узкая улица?? ?

собирать (ягоды и т. п. ) - to gather
had a great time - имел великое время? long? large?
I VISITED my beloved grandmother
I helped her with the garden, walking. - я помогала ей, ГУЛЯЯ?
I advise all of this site. - I recommend this site to everybody.
In general, I've got a lot of impressions in this summer.
that I have a positive charge for the whole year ahead.
П*
Просто*кристина ********
66 277
Лучший ответ
Gulveri Jorbenadze мне даже смешно было читать, что написала))))
спасибо, вы мне очень помогли
I'll remember this summer for a long time. I've got lots of emotions.
This year I've gone abroad to Estonia. It is a beautiful country. Estonia is very clean and has a lot of narrow streets. And Estonia is famous for its fruit forests. I have collected a lot of berries and mushrooms in one of them.
This summer I also visited the city of Sochi. Dad had a great time in a sanatorium Federal Drug Control Service in Khost. I sunbathed, swam in the Black Sea, and read books. It was a wonderful time in my life. And we went on an excursion to Krasnaya Polyana. I visited my beloved grandmother in the village of Lesnoy. There, I helped her with the garden, walked.
And at the end of summer, I stumbled upon a wonderful site for the study of world languages, the title of the site is "Lifemocha". It is possible for me to correspond with people from different countries. I has found many new friends and expanded my English vocabulary. I advise everyboy to use this site.
In general, I had lots of emotions of this summer. The most important thing is that I have energy boost for next year.
ВМ
Владимир Мельцер
28 466
Gulveri Jorbenadze я очень оценила ваш труд, спасибо, но я использую в сочинение простое прошедшее.
Молодцы, давайте дневник, я вам поставлю 11 балов!
Настя Н
Настя Н
4 937
Gulveri Jorbenadze это, наверное, 2?
ну, помогите)))
я вот не пойму, сегодня только 1 сентября, поидее школоло должно бухать, а тут спрашивают про соченение

норм, я поставлю 10 (по 12 бальной)
Сергей Королев
Сергей Королев
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