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I AM GOING TO SPEAK ABOUT A TV SHOW, THAT held in Ukraine. IT IS A COOKING COMPETITION / EVENT. My parents like it too, so we OFTEN watch it together. In this programme we meet interesting people.. At the beginning of the SHOW THERE WERE A LOT OF participants.. Every week the NUMBER OF THOSE lessENED. Each time PROJECT PARTICIPANTS COOK in different PLACES of Ukraine. THE presenter of the SHOW is Anfisa Chekhova. Participants always COOK various dishes. Now ONLY seven participants HAVE LEFT. Last week they were preparing food for psychics. I like THEIR WAY OF COOKING. The atmosphere of the SHOW is very friendly and informal. Judges ARE always honest. Sometimes they give advice to participants. PARTICIPANTS OF THE SHOW ARE OF different age. AT FIRST, WHILE THERE WERE A LOT OF PARTICIPANTS they worked in teams.
I recommend THIS SHOW TO BE HELD (/to HOLD this SHOW) AT schools, kindergartens AND orphanages. I THINK THAT CHILDREN WILL benefit BY A SHOW LIKE THAT.

A TV SHOW I AM GOING TO TELL ABOUT is held in Ukraine.My parents like THE SHOW too, so we watch it together. In this programme we SEE interesting people. At the beginning of the SHOW A BIG NUMBER OF PEOPLE WERE TAKEN PART IN IT. BUT THE FURTHER, THE NUMBER OF THOSE BECOME LESS. Each time PROJECT PARTICIPANTS ARE preparing to COOK VARIETY OF DISHES in different cities of Ukraine. THE presenter of the SHOW is Anfisa Chekhova. Now, IN THAT SHOW THE ONLY SEVEN PARTICIPANTS. Last week they were preparing food for psychics. I like THEIR WAY OF COOKING. The atmosphere of the programme is very friendly and informal. THE Judges ARE always honest. Sometimes they give advice to participants. IN THIS SHOW PEOPLE WHO COOK SOME FOOD ARE (ЕСЛИ ОНИ ПО ПРОФЕССИИ ПОВАРА, ТО МОЖНО COOKS ИЛИ THE PARTICIPANTS) OF different ageS. When there were TOO MUCH PARTICIPANTS there WERE TEAMS EXISTENCE.
I recommend to WATCH this TV SHOW AT schools, kindergartens, orphanages. Then it will bring benefit to people. (ТОГДА ЭТО ПРИНЕСЁТ ПОЛЬЗУ) всмысле?