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In modern life there are still problems like "Fathers and Children".
Lack of love and attention to the children can make them unhappy.
Some parents show their love as an excessive attention to
their children. I think parents shouldn`t totally control their
children. Sometimes they must give them freedom.
My relations with my parents are all right. Every day I can
talk with them about everything. They know my problems
just as theirs. My parents have got a lot of experience and
they always can give me a good advice. Many other parents
are busy, but my parents help me at any time. I have some
friends whose parents treat them unfairly as small children.
My parents treat me as an adult. I believe that my relationship
with my parents are very good, which is rare nowadays.
Sometimes I think they are wrong, but I still love my parents,
and I think that they are the best ones in the world.

У Александра отличный ответ, я бы сделала несколько поправок.
Предложение 1 - There are still problems like "Fathers and Children" in mordern life. (порядок слов)
Предложение 5 - Sometimes they HAVE TO give some freedom....
Предложение 6 - My relations with my parents are REALLY GOOD.
Предложение 9 - My parents GOT (or HAVE GOTTEN) a lot of experience and the COULD (!) give me a good advice. (согласование времен)