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It is two thousand and thirty second year now. It's autumn now. It's raining. Fourteen years ago I graduated from Sumy State University. Now I work as a interpreter(переводчик устной речи. translator это более техническое слово) . I have a husband, a daughter and a son. My son is twelve, daughter is nine years old. ( I'm not a native american.(здесь и правда не понятно. если вы имели в виду, что вы не житель америки, а просто по делу приехали, то надо I'm not an American или я не живу в Америке - I do not live in America....a native american это вообще то индеец и вы естественно не индеец))) ) Since I worked Diligently, I was invited abroad on a business meeting in the U.S.. I am very satisfied with my job because I do work which I like.

В английском предложении всегда должен быть глагол.
It's year two thousand and thirty-two. It's autumn. It's raining. Fourteen years ago I graduated from Sumy State University. Now I XXX work AS a translator. I have a husband, a daughter and a son. My son IS twelve and daughter IS nine years OLD.
XXXXXXX (? - не поняла) . BECAUSE I WORKED Diligently, I was invited TO a business meeting in the U.S.. I am XXX satisfied with my JOB COMPLETELY because I ENJOY DOING IT.

IT'S two thousand and thirty second year now. IT'S autumn. It's raining outside. Fourteen years ago I graduated from Sumy State University. Now I'M a translator. I have a husband, a daughter and a son. My son IS twelve years OLD and daughter IS nine years OLD (либо вообще без years). Now I'm not a native. (фиг знает, что вы имели в виду. . наверно, что сыбали из страны, ну, тогда так и напишите) I'M working diligently, I was invited TO a business meeting in the U.S.. I am very satisfied with my work because I am engaged in favorite business.