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All my life I live in the big city. There is a phrase “The city never sleeps”. And I understand how this phrase is correct. I live far enough away from the busy road. But of course in a rush hour i always hear cars and their noise. Even at night. This is certainly a huge minus. But life is the cities has its pluses. For example there are a lot of cultural activities, you can do whatever you want, you can be whatever you want because there are a lot of schools, universities, job opportunities. For the first view it seems wonderful. But sometimes my family and I come to the country. And when I see how wrong I was. There is so quiet. I can hear the singing birds in the morning, when the sun came up, I can see the clear sky without polluted clouds. And then I understand that life in city is awful.

I think I prefer living in the country living in the city. But then I remember that living in the country is a dead end. There is no way to realize myself. And I have to get back to the polluted and noisy city.

I understand that living in the city is better, but I would prefer to live in the country.

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31.05.2016

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Answer 1 · 2016-05-28 20:09:15

Ошибок "миллион", буквально в каждом предложении.
Исправить все означает по сути заново написать текст.
All my life I live in the big city. - I HAVE BEEN LIVING in a big city all my life.
There is a phrase “The city never sleeps”.
And I understand how truthful this phrase is.
I live QUITE FAR from A busy road.
But, of course, in rush hour I always hear cars and the noise they make, even at night.
But life IN cities has its pluses.
For example, there are a lot of cultural activities, you can do whatever you want, you can be whatever (если говорить о профессии, то whatever - то, что нужно) you want, because there are a lot of schools, universities, job opportunities.
At first sight (glance) it seems wonderful.
But sometimes my family and I GO to the country.
And THEN I REALISE how wrong I was. (лучше And it makes me realize ...)
IT is so quiet. I can hear the BIRDS SING/SINGING (конструкция Complex Object) in the morning, when the sun RISES up, I can see the clear sky without polluted clouds. And then I understand that life in THE city is awful.

I think I prefer living in the country TO living in the city. (Или I guess I prefer TO live in the country RATHER THAN live in the city.)
But then I remember that living in the country is × dead end.
As for me, I suppose there is no way to fulfil myself. And I have to go back to the polluted and noisy city.

I understand that living in the city is better, but I would prefer to live in the country.

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Лёха *** огромное Вам спасибо