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I was born in Orenburg. After leaving school in 1990 I moved to Moscow, where was engaged in commerce. Living in Moscow I began to learn English. I Was a member of international organization of UBF(United Bible Federation), where I communicated with Americans. I used to watch films in English with subtitles in special cinemas. When hyperinflation began and my commerce went bust, I returned home and entered Orenburg State University (Electroengineering department). After having recieved degree in electrical engineering I worked as an electrical engineer in the next companies:
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During the latest 2 years I took an interest in internet-trading.By means of brokerage firm I was trading in stocks on NYSE(NewYork Stock Exchange). Constantly kept up with
economic news(Bloomberg-tv, DowJohns-news), which improved my English skills .Sometimes I also observed the movement of DE (Deere & Company) stock.

I was born in Orenburg. After FINISHING school in 1990 I moved TO Moscow where I WORKED [was engaged] in commerce. WHILE living in Moscow I began to learn English. I was a member of international organization of UBF(United Bible Federation) where I ASSOTIATED [communicated] with Americans. I used to watch films in English with subtitles in special cinemas. When THE hyperinflation BEGAN and my commerce went bust, I WENT BACK home and entered Orenburg State University (Electroengineering department). ON RECIEVING [After having recieved] A degree in electrical engineering I worked as an electrical engineer in the FLLOWING [next] companies:
During the LAST 2 years I took an interest in internet-SALES. By means of brokerage firm I HAVE BEEN A WHOLESALE DEALER [was trading in stocks on] AT NYSE(NewYork Stock Exchange). I REGULARLY [Constantly] keEP up with economic news(Bloomberg-tv, DowJohns-news), THAT [which] HAS improved my skills IN ENGLISH.Sometimes I also observe the movement of DE (Deere & Company) stock.

Internet trading - Internet retail; online selling ("Market Leader")

I was born in Orenburg. After GRADUATING school in 1990 I moved INTO Moscow where I was engaged in commerce. Living in Moscow I began to learn English. I was a member of international organization of UBF(United Bible Federation) where I communicated with Americans. I used to watch films in English with subtitles in special cinemas. When THE hyperinflation HAD BEGUN and my commerce went bust, I TURNED BACK AT home and entered Orenburg State University (Electroengineering department). After having recieved A degree in electrical engineering I worked as an electrical engineer in the next companies:
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2
3
During the latest 2 years I took an interest in internet-trading. By means of brokerage firm I was trading in stocks on NYSE(NewYork Stock Exchange). Constantly kept up with economic news(Bloomberg-tv, DowJohns-news) which improved my skills IN ENGLISH.Sometimes I also observe the movement of DE (Deere & Company) stock.