Проверить английский текст на грамотность. Нужна помощь.

I believe that a person is the whole world. And even the most ordinary person is the holder of his (her) colorful universe. Fortunately, I was lucky. After all, I could easily see the individual expressiveness of his girlfriend. Nastya appeared in my life because of our shared passion for Harry Potter's books. But we became the real friends when we got to know each other well. Nastya is a young girl of eighteen or nineteen. She has dyed red hair, brown eyes and a slightly hooked nose. She loves to dress with taste, prefers elegant, but at the same time comfortable things. It seems she has a great complexion for her age. But Nastya, like most girls, is crazy about losing weight. After all, beauty has no limit!

My friend is a very emotional person. Sometimes she gets frustrating about mere trifles, and sometimes she is happy for no reason. Frankly, Nastya is quite amorous. Yet she has a good heart. When I needed support, she never left me.

She loves listening to music, namely rock. Her hobby is to draw cartoon characters and then decorate her room with drawings. Sometimes, she writes short stories. And the most interesting fact is that she is a cosplayer. I admire her work. Nastya is my passion. I really love her. Sometimes I want to be closer to her.

их там так много, что лень все перечислять и тем более исправлять

Человек за тебя перевел, а тебе мало... Совесть надо иметь. Ошибки есть, но ищи сама