Поверьте пожалуйста письмо. Правильно ли употреблены времена? Да и просто грамота построения предложений? Можно ли заменить какими нибудь синонимами слово purchases? И как можно убрать тавтологию в вопросах про пикник? Спасибо.
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear it from you.
parents give me pocket money every week. I usually spend it on delicious food, clothes, shopping for animals, various entertainment like a cinema. Parents believe that most of my purchases are spontaneous and useless. However, I believe that this is not the case. I myself earn some money by walking with dogs. This is a very small income, but this is enough to buy something tasty. And finally, I would like to ask you something. Do you like picnics? how was your picnic? What did you do at the picnic?
I look forward to hearing you.
Best wishes,
Masha
Лингвистика
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Игорь Куимов
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Dear Alice,
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear () from you.
My parents give me pocket money every week. I usually spend it on food, clothes, shopping for animals(our pets?), entertainment like () cinema(movies). They believe that I spend money thoughtlessly on trash. However, I believe that this is not the case. I earn some money myself by walking the dogs. This is a very small income, but it's enough to buy something yummy.
I'd like to ask you something. How was your picnic? What did you do at the picnic? Do you like picnics?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Masha
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear () from you.
My parents give me pocket money every week. I usually spend it on food, clothes, shopping for animals(our pets?), entertainment like () cinema(movies). They believe that I spend money thoughtlessly on trash. However, I believe that this is not the case. I earn some money myself by walking the dogs. This is a very small income, but it's enough to buy something yummy.
I'd like to ask you something. How was your picnic? What did you do at the picnic? Do you like picnics?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Masha
Dear Alice,
Thanks a lot for your letter. It was great to hear from you.
My parents give me pocket money every week. I usually spend it on delicious food, clothes, purchases for my pets, various types of entertainment such as cinema and so on. My parents believe that most of my purchases are spontaneous and useless. However, I believe that this is not the case (в смысле?). I earn some money myself by walking dogs. This is a very small income, but this is enough to buy something tasty. And finally, I would like to ask you something. Do you like picnics? How was your picnic? What did you do at the picnic?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Masha
Thanks a lot for your letter. It was great to hear from you.
My parents give me pocket money every week. I usually spend it on delicious food, clothes, purchases for my pets, various types of entertainment such as cinema and so on. My parents believe that most of my purchases are spontaneous and useless. However, I believe that this is not the case (в смысле?). I earn some money myself by walking dogs. This is a very small income, but this is enough to buy something tasty. And finally, I would like to ask you something. Do you like picnics? How was your picnic? What did you do at the picnic?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Masha
Elena Gherman
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