Никогда здесь не прошу ни о чем подобном, но сейчас реально нужна помощь. Прошу проверить мой ответ на англ. , который я за неприменяемостью уже несколько подзабыла.
Dear Ms. ..
thank you very much for your answer! I'm living in Moscow, but I'd like to undergo practical editorial training abroad. I found your website by chance and was very glad that there are also in Austria such sites like this. I'm very interested in investigative journalism and find helping people the second most important task of every (good) journalist.
I find it very important what you have to deal with. I'm very interested in all journalistic positions that you offered and can do some journalistic job for you - everything that you have enumerated (making calls, doing interviews, researching, following leads, writing articles etc.) and translations into German as well. Also I could help you with coordination work and PR, because I have some experience in it, but I'm not sure it'd be possible, because now I'm in Moscow and I will move to Vienna in just two years. Though I'm also ready to help you if you'll need some informations from Moscow. In summer, I have a bit more than a one month vacation (some part of it is already scheduled - apropos, with a seminar for investigative journalism in Hamburg) and can dedicate my free time this project. In Moscow I'll have less time because of being busy.
At the moment I'm not sure when I'm exactly able to start, but I can give an exact answer in the beginning of next week.
I'd be very glad to become a member of this project and to make my contribution to it.
Kind regards,
...
Лингвистика
Проверьте, пожалуйста, важное письмо на английском! ! (НЕ школьное д\з)
Вообще нормуль. Небольшие дополнения
Thank you very much for your answer! (предложение начинается с большой буквы)
that there are sites like this also in Austria (порядок слов поменять и убрать или such или like this)
everything that you have listed (заменить слово)
I will move to Vienna in two years only (поменять слово. just имеет оттенок "только лишь", то есть "мало", а вы хотите сказать, что "два года" это много)
In summer, I have more than one month of vacation (some part of it is already occupied, apropos, by taking part in a seminar (убрать a bit, остальное - опционально)
In Moscow I'll have less time due to being very busy. - нелогичное предложение, в предыдущем вы говорили про лето, а тут вдруг начинаете про Москву
At the moment I'm not sure when I will be able to start exactly, but I can give an exact answer at the beginning of next week. (поменять время и предлог, переставить exactly)
I'd be very glad to become a part of this project and to make my contribution to it. (на мой взгляд лучше заменить слово member на другое)
Общее пожелание: попробуйте заменить все сокращения, типа i'll i'd на полные слова I will, I would и т. п.
Thank you very much for your answer! (предложение начинается с большой буквы)
that there are sites like this also in Austria (порядок слов поменять и убрать или such или like this)
everything that you have listed (заменить слово)
I will move to Vienna in two years only (поменять слово. just имеет оттенок "только лишь", то есть "мало", а вы хотите сказать, что "два года" это много)
In summer, I have more than one month of vacation (some part of it is already occupied, apropos, by taking part in a seminar (убрать a bit, остальное - опционально)
In Moscow I'll have less time due to being very busy. - нелогичное предложение, в предыдущем вы говорили про лето, а тут вдруг начинаете про Москву
At the moment I'm not sure when I will be able to start exactly, but I can give an exact answer at the beginning of next week. (поменять время и предлог, переставить exactly)
I'd be very glad to become a part of this project and to make my contribution to it. (на мой взгляд лучше заменить слово member на другое)
Общее пожелание: попробуйте заменить все сокращения, типа i'll i'd на полные слова I will, I would и т. п.
Dear Ms. ..
... I found your website by chance and was very glad to discover that there were several sites like this in Austria. I'm very interested in investigative journalism and consider helping people the second most important task of every (good) journalist.
I find your work to be very important not only for a certain person but for a society as a whole. I'm very interested in all journalistic positions that you offered and can do some journalistic job for you - everything that you have listed (making calls, doing interviews, researching, following leads, writing articles etc.) and translations into German as well. Also I can participate in coordination work and PR, because I have some experience in it, although now I'm in Moscow and I will move to Vienna in two years. Nevertheles I'm also ready work if you need some information from Moscow. ..
At the moment I'm not sure when I can start working, but I'll be able to give an exact answer in the beginning of next week. ..
как-то так
... I found your website by chance and was very glad to discover that there were several sites like this in Austria. I'm very interested in investigative journalism and consider helping people the second most important task of every (good) journalist.
I find your work to be very important not only for a certain person but for a society as a whole. I'm very interested in all journalistic positions that you offered and can do some journalistic job for you - everything that you have listed (making calls, doing interviews, researching, following leads, writing articles etc.) and translations into German as well. Also I can participate in coordination work and PR, because I have some experience in it, although now I'm in Moscow and I will move to Vienna in two years. Nevertheles I'm also ready work if you need some information from Moscow. ..
At the moment I'm not sure when I can start working, but I'll be able to give an exact answer in the beginning of next week. ..
как-то так
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