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Английский - мой родной язык, итак я помогу:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I would like to apply to participate in your student exchange program. I learned of it from your on-line advertisement.

Your program excites me, because I think it represents an exceptional opportunity for me to grow as a person, to improve my English language skills, and to prepare myself for future job openings for which English is a requirement.

I feel that it is very important for me to be able to speak English, not only for my future career but for the access it would afford me to other cultures. Your program would help me progress toward my goal by letting me improve my communication skills in a foreign country. I am sure you would agree that the best way to learn any language is to immerse yourself in it by living in a country where that language is spoken. There are very few native speakers of English in my country, which makes studying the language abroad that much more crucial. I know I would also benefit from getting some work experience abroad, which could only assist my language acquisition.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully.

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