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Оцените, пожалуйста, мою английскую писанину, разберите ошибки, если есть, посоветуйте, как мне её улучшить.

Dear Ben, thank you a lot for the letter. I am glad to see it. Sorry, I could not answer your previous letter because I was busy with preparing for exams.
This is wonderful that your brother found a hobby. Well, I see some questions in your letter.
I think, collecting things is an interesting hobby, so people do it. For example, I would like to collect different coins. Of course, in Russia teenagers like different hobbies, but they mostly do cycling, drawing, or playing computer games.
But which is hobbies interesting for you? What do you usually? What do you think about collecting coins?
I am looking forward to your answer.
With love, your friend Nadia.
Александр Ахмедов
Александр Ахмедов
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This is wonderful that your brother has found a hobby.
teenagers have different hobbies.
What are your hobbies?
What do you do usually?
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Лучший ответ
ураган какой то. улучшить это нельзя, только заново всё переписать
отсутствуют знания английского на самом базовом уровне и полное неумение пользоваться словарями
P.S. вести за вас переписку не предлагать
Денис Полун
Денис Полун
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Всё нормально.
Альфия Шайдуллина
Альфия Шайдуллина
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Денис Полун это стёб такой?
Обращение
Dear ***,

С новой строки с заглавной буквы

Начало
Thank you//thanks for your email/message.
Thank you for your letter, but some things in it (simply) surprised/amused/excited/… me.
It was good to get it and learn about…
It was good to hear from you.
I haven’t heard from you for a while.
It was nice of you to share … (with me)
I haven’t written sooner as … (I was busy at school/…)
Sorry, I didn’t write earlier, but ..
Sorry for not writing for so long.
I was glad to get/receive your email and find out your (way and) attitude towards …
I’ve had to think much over your question about …
I really feel sorry/happy/sad for you
Thanks a lot. It was great to get your email! I’ve learnt a lot about ….
I guess you…
I laughed a lot/smiled/felt sympathy/…reading about …
It was great to learn the news.
It was nice to read about….
I was sorry to learn about / to learn that …//I’m sorry to hear about…
I can’t help admiring your enthusiasm about …
__
Hope you’re OK.
How are you doing? / How are you?
Hi from Moscow.
Андрей Хачатуров
Андрей Хачатуров
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Андрей Хачатуров Основная часть
I think/I believe/I suppose/I’m afraid/I doubt/ I (quite) agree with you/I can’t agree more/My thoughts exactly. /I feel the same way.
Maybe, /Perhaps,/ As for …/As for me, /As for your questions, /Frankly speaking,/ On the one hand, /On the other hand, / Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, /First of all, /Finally, /To tell the truth, /Besides, / What’s more, /Moreover,/However, /Fortunately,/ Unfortunately, / By the way, /
You know, / You see, / Guess what?
though/because/but/so/as/
It’s really wonderful/amazing/terrible/ …!
I can’t really imagine…
This is what I like (most of all)/where I feel myself //am successful/
The thing is (that) /
I’d like to share my experience/thoughts/ideas/…
Андрей Хачатуров I am glad to see it. >> I was glad to get it/I was glad to receive it
Sorry, I could not answer your previous letter because I was busy with preparing for exams.>> ...was busy preparing ...
but they mostly do cycling, drawing, or playing computer games.>> most of them prefer cycling, drawing or playing computer games

Нет запятой после I think и вообще между частями сложного предложения, если главное стоит перед придаточным.
but which hobbies are interesting for you*, of course, in Russia, teenagers*
Сергей Шандро
Сергей Шандро
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