Такая хрень по английскому(7кл) пойдет? Надо географическое положение Великобритании. Внутри.

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и для 7-го класса маловато...

The Geographical Position of Great Britain (1)

There are two large islands and several smaller ones, which lie in the north-west coast of Europe. Collectively they are known as the British Isles. The largest island is called Great Britain. The smaller one is called Ireland. Great Britain is separated from the continent by the English Channel. The country is washed by the waters of the Atlantic Ocean. Great Britain is separated from Belgium and Holland by the North Sea, and from Ireland - by the Irish Sea.

In the British Isles there are two states. One of them governs of the most of the island of Ireland. This state is usually called the Republic of Ireland. The other state has authority over the rest of the territory. The official name of this country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But it is usually known by a shorter name - "The United Kingdom". The total area of Great Britain is 244,000 square km.

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про остров здесь можно списать: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Britain

название океанов и морей употребляются с артиклем the

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