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My name is Nadja, but it not the first name which was given to me by parents. At first I wished to name Nastja but why that have changed the mind. I was born in Uralsk small town under the name Perm where I live till now. Here there is my school in which I studied to 9 classes. My mum was my teacher of geography, I very much liked its lessons. Sometimes going from school home, I could meet the daddy, it works on first aid - the doctor. Still I have seniors the brother and sister. The brother studies at the same institute as I, only am more senior a course. Sister has married and lives not with us. And I not so small, am time to live independently. I already have one trade he/she is the manager, but it not a limit. And this summer I have entered the institute to graduate and become cleverer. I consider that in a life a lot of interesting and to stop on what that one it is not meaningful, it is necessary to go always forward.

Баян Абишева · Accepted Answer

My name is Nadya, but it's not the name I was given by my parents. First I wanted to have the name Nastya but then I changed my mind. I was born in Uralsk small town not far from Perm where I live now. There is my school here in which I have studied for 9 years . My mum was my geography teacher, I liked her lessons very much. My Dad is a doctor.I often met him going home after school. 
 I have younger brother and sister. The brother studies at the same institute as I do . Sister is married and lives with her own family. And I am not small, I can live on my own. I have already had a trade. I am a manager, but it not the limit. This summer I have entered the institute to get the higher education. I think that there are a lot of interesting things in the world .It is important to discover something new. 
I заглавное и точки в конце предложения, пожалуйста. 
А мне понравилось ваше ессе. Подучите перфект.

Жека Смирнягин · Answer

My name is Nadya, but it's not the name i was given by my parents. First of all I wanted to have a name Nastya but then i changed my mind. I was born in Uralsk small town not far from Perm where I live now. there is my school in which I studied 9 years. My mum was a geography teacher, I like her lessons very much. Sometimes on my way home i used to meet my dad. He's a doctor. i have younger brother and sister. The brother studies at the same institute as I do . Sister has married and lives with her own family. And I am not so small, i can live by myself. I already have one trade he/she is the manager, but it not a limit. And this summer I entered the institute to get my higher education. I think that there are a lot of interesting things in the world .it is important to discover something new 
 
не зная смысла текста, примерно так. а вообще, написали вы текстик ОЧЕНЬ слабенький для человека, который учится в вузе. тянет на 3 класс.

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