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Гринпис - международная организация защитников окружающей среды. Она возникла в начале 70-х годов из группы активных противников испытаний ядерного оружия. Сегодня в нее входят почти два миллиона человек из пятнадцати стран. Международная штаб-квартира Гринпис находится в лондоне. Однако организация имеет десятки своих представительств и контор во многих государствах.
Гринпис приступила к активным действиям сразу после своего создания. В1972 - 1973г, она начала кампанию протеста против ядерных испытаний франции на атолле Муруроа. Она осудила практику захоронения в океане радиоктивных отходов, бесконтрольную деятельность монополий, порождающую кислотные дожди в северной америке и европе.
10 июля 1985 года агенты французских спецслужб взорвали одно из судов организации - рейнбоу уорриор в новозеландском порту Окленд. Это судно готовилось отплыть к атоллу Муруроа. Взрыв был устроен с целью запугать активистов движения, настойчиво требующих немедленного прекращения испытаний ядерного оружия, проводимых Францией в южной части Тихого океана.

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The Green Peace is an international organization of environmental defenders. It has appeared in the early 70ies from group of active opponents of nuclear weapon tests. Nowadays, almost 2 million people from 15 countries number it. International headquarters are representations and offices in many governments.
The Green Peace has proceeded to vigorouses immediately after it's creation. In 1972-1973 it has begun to launch a compaign against France nuclear tests on the Mururoa atoll. It denounced the practice of dumping ocean radioactive wastes, uncontrolled monopolies activity, result in acid rains in North America and Europe.
The basic method of Green Peace struggle is passive resistance. The Green Peace activists are going to tests grounds of nuclear weapon by sailing boats and yachts, climb up on chimney-stalks etc. Thereby they attempt to rouse public opinion, attract his attention to the problem of humanity survival itself.
On the 10th of July the agents of French special services have blown up one of organizations vessels - ''Rainbow Warrior'' in New Zealand port Auckland. This vessel was about to set out to the Mururoa atoll. The explosion was arranged on purpose to intimidate the activists, persistently clamouring for immediately cessation of nuclear weapons tests, conducted by France in the South range of the Pacific Ocean.

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1 THE international organization, конкретная организация
2 70s
3 there are almost 2 million people from 15 countries in this organization.
4 The international headquarters of the Green Peace is located in London.
5 It has many branch offices in many countries.
6 against nuclear tests of France
7 of dumping radioactive wastes in ocean and uncontrolled monopolies' activity as a result of appearing acid rains ...
8 to test grounds
9 its attention
10 of humanity surviving itself
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...from THE group of active opponents
resultED in acid rains in North America and Europe.
to TEST grounds of nuclear weapon by sailing boats and yachts, climbING up on chimney-stalks
one of THE organizations vessels
The explosion was arranged WITH THE purpose
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