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My favorite toy was a Little Tiger because it was soft and beautiful.
My grandmother gave it to me when I was five years old. I fell in love with it at once. I used to like to take my Little Tiger with me to nursery where the children would ask me to show them my toy. I loved to dress my Tiger up in different clothes so it would not get cold.
I was delighted when my Grandmother gave me the toy and she understood that I loved it!
So that was the best toy I have ever had.

Столько ошибок, что невозможно даже понять, о чем речь. Дайте русский оригинал.

Ошибок много. Увы, моих познаний хватило лишь на то, чтобы понять это. Вот первые два предложения вроде бы должны выглядеть так:
My favoritest toy - is a Turgeon.
Because it is beautiful and soft.

Безграмотная калька электронным переводчиком.

My most favorite toy IS a Ttiger cub.
Because it IS beautiful and soft.
MY grandmother presented it to me when I was 5 years old. I have fallen in love at once with this funny toy. I liked to take the Tiger cub to kindergarten. All children asked me to show it. I liked it very much to dress up my Tiger cub in different clothes so that it wouldn't had got cold.
When it was presented to me I was delighted very much . Granny understood that her gift was pleasant for me.
This is most favorite toy of the childhood.

правильно, на английский с русским акцентом)

Turgeon is my favourite toy. When I was 5 my grandma presented it to me. I liked the toy at once. I liked to bring my toy to the kindergarten. All children asked me to show it to them. I liked to dress it up in different clothes 'cause I was afraid it could get cold. When it was presented to me I was really delighted. My grandma knew I liked her present. That was the best toy I have ever had.
Думаю так будет лучше)))))))))