Проверьте пожалуйста,правильно ли я все написал)

To tell you the truth, I`m happy with my family. I trust them a lot. Besides, I can rely on them in any situation.We always talk our problems through and turn to each other for help. The emotional support of my family is priceless for me. I think we need a family for comfort and protection. Home is the nicest place to be, no doubt
As for my friend, he is close to me as well. I enjoy playing football with him.
I`m happy to have my family and my friend

1 - my family and my friends make me truly happy
о поддержке лучше так: their emotional support is priceless
4 предложение - there are a lot of things that make me happy
5 - playing football with my friends every day is happiness for me

One of the things that make me happy is my family and relatives. The emotional suport of them is priceless for me. I can rely on them in any situation. I'm so happy when I'm with them.
There are many things that make me happy. I enjoy playing football with my friends every day. I also like reading adventure books and watching horror films on TV.
I wish I always lived like this.

One of the things that make me happy...
There are many things...
I am happy to play football with my friends every day.
I am happy when the sky is blue and the sun is shining.

Твая писать грамота карашо ощнь англицки знать

Не, неправильно. Объясняю технологию: Пишешь по-русски желательно простыми фразами что хочешь сказать. Переводишь в гугле на английский. Затем в гугле же переводишь на русский и правя в переводчике английский текст добиваешься, чтоб русский перевод не звучал коряво.

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