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Family values is BASED on the morals. First of all, we should support, respect, comfort,appreсiate each other. Family is the most important and valuable that we have,but frequently we don’t understand it, because there is no place like «home».
In last issue of magazine WE'VE told to you about Sasha’s problem,our experts decided to give some ADVICES FOR Sasha.
Dear Sasha,
Your problem is really serious. ParentsTREAT UNFAIRLY to you. So many families so many family relations. Every FAMILY has different problems. Parents say that its difficult to discipline children, but they shouldn’t forget that children need privacy and their point of view. What we CAN ADVICE TO you? You should discuss it and try to listen and understand each other. Also you may create a list of special rules for everyone.
We wish you be patient and tolerant, we hope parents will understand you.

We wish you live without serious problem.

Вот мой вариант. Хорошо написано, только обрати внимание на употребление модальных глаголов can,may,wish - после них to не ставится перед глаголом: can make (а не can to make), I wish you be happy... ну и тд. а так молодец. еще и красивая)

Family values are based on the morals. First of all, we should support, respect, and appreсiate each other. Family is the most important and valuable that we have,but frequently we don’t understand it though there is no place like «home».

In the last issue we told you about Sasha’s problem,our experts decided to give Sasha.
some tips.
Dear Sasha,
Your problem is really serious. Your p arents treat you unfairly . So many families so many relations. Every family has different problems. Parents consider that its difficult to discipline children, but they mustn’t forget that children need privacy and their own point of view. What can we advise you? You should discuss your problem and learn to listen and understand people around you. Also you should make a list of special rules for everyone.
We wish you to be patient and tolerant, we hope your parents will understand you.

We wish you to communicate with peoplle without any problems

Family values are based on morals. First, we should support, respect, and appreсiate our relatives. Family is the most important and valuable that we have,but frequently we don’t understand it though there is no place like «home».

In the last issue we told you about Sasha’s problem,our experts decided to give Sasha.
some tips.
Dear Sasha,
Your problem is really serious. Your p arents treat you unfairly . So many families so many relations. Every family has a lot of various problems. Parents consider it difficult to discipline children. They mustn’t forget that children need privacy and their own point of view. What can we advise to you? You should discuss your problem and learn to listen and understand people around you. Also you should make a list of special rules for everyone.
We wish you to be patient and tolerant, we hope your parents will understand you.

We wish you to communicate with peoplle without any problems