Умные, добрые люди, пожалуйста помогите перевести на английский (только собственный перевод).

Sasha writes that she's tired of that life and wants to leave home as soon as possible, however, just as well as Kelly I believe she's not that unhappy. She's lucky to some degree to have such a big family. Some people would do anything to stay with their family. Yet on the other hand, Sasha's brothers and sister should have more sympathy for her while parents should trust her. I believe Kelly's problem is more serious as unlike Sasha she doesn't have family at all.
Паша Мартынов, попытка хорошая, я, собственно, ваш текст малость переделал.

Никита иди в сад, одно предложение еще можно попросить.
Твоя заявка у спецов на 500 рублей как минимум тянет.
Как ты думаешь, есть здесь лохи?

Sasha has written that she is a bit tired of her life and she wants to leave home as soon as possible. But Kelly and I believe she is not so miserable. She is pretty lucky she has a big family. Some people do all the best to be with their families. However, Sasha's brothers and sisters should be more caring and her parents have to trust her.
Kelly's problem is much more serious though ///
Тут не очень логично - не так-ли? Семьи -нет, проблема -то глобальнее.
Дом. з. из Миллениума?

Sasa writes that she was tired of such life and wants to leave more soon the house, but I as well as Kelly consider that it not such the unfortunate. To some extent to it has carried, after all at it such big family. Some on all are ready if only to be with the family. But on the other hand brothers and sister Sashi should be more sympathizing, and parents to trust it. I consider Kelly's problem as more serious as unlike Sasha it doesn't have family in general.