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Английский. Есть ли ошибки в тексте? Если да, то укажите их, пожалуйста.

I graduated learning in school recently. I studied in public school. My school is located in downtown Moscow, near metro station Novokuznetskaya.
I went to school in 2000, when I was six years old. In elementary school there were only basic subjects: Russian language, mathematics, literature, history of Moscow, physical education. In high school were added new subjects: world history, English, social studies, chemistry and physics. In the last two years of learning have been added optional courses on sociology and economy.
At my school a lot of time was devoted to the history and mathematics, but very little time for learning of English. So I know English very bad. I hope that in institute I shall be able to improve my knowledge in English.
History and mathematics were my favourite subjects. I participated in olympiads in these subjects.
I passed exams in Russian language, mathematics and social studies for entering the institute. Mathematics was the most difficult subject for me. I long prepared for exams in mathematics.
At school I liked the teachers, optional courses and variety excursions. But I didn’t like the timetable. We were released from lessons early on weekdays, so we studied on Saturday. Despite this, I have the most pleasant memories of school life.
This year I finished school ( не надо говорить public, это слово имеет разный смысл в британском и американском английском. Вы имеете в виду частную школу?) . I went to school in downtown Moscow, near the Novokuznetskaya metro station . (Чтобы избежать заминки с согласованием времен, которое здесь не обязательно, но может вызвать вопросы, можно объединить предложения) .
I entered school in 2000 when I was six (years old). There were only basic subjects in elementary school : THE Russian language, mathematics, literature, history of Moscow, and physical education. In high school new subjects were added(порядок слов - подлежащее предшествует сказуемому) : world history, English, social studies, chemistry and physics. In the last two years optional courses on sociology and economy were added .
At my school a lot of time was devoted to history and mathematics, but very little attention was given to English. So I don't know English very well. I hope that at college (at the university) I shall/will be able to improve my knowledge of English.
History and mathematics were my favourite subjects. I participated in olympiads (competitions?) in these subjects.
I passed exams in the Russian language, mathematics and social studies for entering the university. Mathematics was the most difficult subject for me. It took me a long time to prepare for the maths exam.
At school I liked the teachers, optional courses, and excursions. But I didn’t like the timetable. Classes finished early on weekdays, so we studied on Saturday. Despite this, I have the most pleasant memories of school life.
Александра Ильина
Александра Ильина
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I have finished school studing recently. graduated from - это про вузы

I studied in А public school. My school WAS ( согласуем время) located in THE downtown OF Moscow, near Novokuznetskaya metro station.
In high school new subjects were added....порядок слов: подлежащее перед сказуемым.
.The last two years The optional courses on sociology and economICS WERE added. - потому что есть указание на прошедшее время ( без предлога, пж.)
alla121955
alla121955
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Надежда Гугиева Большое спасибо!
Аня Солдатова-Кузнецова забейте в гугл фразу "i have graduated from high school" (точно так же, в кавычках) и посмотрите сколько результатов выдает поиск с точно такой же фразой. кстате, это хороший способ проверки правильности слов или словосочитаний. не забывайте брать в кавычки, это позволяет искать именно заданную фразу.
Столько ошибок, что надо просто снова писать, неохота...
Лена Ким
Лена Ким
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Аня Солдатова-Кузнецова папа вещь говорит :D
есть. почти в каждом предложении. текст написан по-русски с использованием английских слов. в основном ошибки в речевых оборотах. мысль ты свою донес, но ошибки всеравно там.
Надежда Гугиева Ну а именно с импользованием времён есть? Или только речевые обороты неправильны?..

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