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25. Children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As we know children are very observant and are likely to copy adults' behavior. Leading psychologists compare children to sponges. There is a wise proverb stating that "The apple doesn't fall far from the tree" that means that children often take after parents in appearance and behavior.
As for me, I firmly believe that children indeed behave like adults and I was convinced in it from my firsthand experience. My daughter is really my shadow. Once we went to the exhibition centre. There were lockers in the corridor which lead to the main exhibition hall. Bags and other stuff were forbidden to take with you so everybody had to leave things in these lockers. There was no notice stating that this service is to be paid, so I thought it is free. I opened it and put all our stuff inside it. After it was closed automatically I saw a tiny notice that a key would not be released until a coin was inserted. I left all my money in my car which I parked about an hour's walk from the exhibition centre. I was very frustrated and without thinking I said Damn it. I do not have any money now hang a big notification about the price up so that everybody can notice it immediately. After my actions my daughter opened another locker then closed it and said "Damn it". I am now watching my words more closely.
Another proverb connected with copying actions of parents by children is "Do as I say, not as I do". This means follow my advice but don't follow my example. Although many examples show that children would rather copy adult's actions than take words.
For instance, to sit with a cigarette in your hand and tell your kid not to smoke doesn't guarantee he or she will not smoke. My family exhibits that particular issue: My grandparents never smoked . My parents have never smoked. I have never smoked.
In my view appropriate behaviour is doing what you are teaching your children and the following proverb has proved this" Actions speak louder than words".