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It was late and the streets were empty as i was going back home after work last Friday evining. This day it was especially silent. I went on streets and sang motive of a song "I love you baby". Simultaneously I look around. I will tell fairly, to me it was terrible. Probably it was a presentiment." it was necessary to go by a taxi "with this thought I has curtailed on other street as out of te blue I was captured by wild horror, on the bridge there were two men and one of them had a knife. The mixed feelings were caused in me by this show: on the one hand I understood that it is necessary to run, and on the other hand understood that probably I last hope of the person on which have attacked. I knew that I need to think up something but before I have started to consider a situation me have called rough threaten tone" hey you, a mug go here "the second person has rushed to run and the person with a knife has run for me so I didn't run never. Perhaps, only at school, and that it won't be compared to how I ran now. I have never turned back, and only having reached a pay phone I was closed there and sat likely very long, anybody and hasn't appeared also I has guessed to call in police, has described the person with a knife, has then called a taxi. Next day in news showed that person with a knife, there is it was the criminal with the experience: It plundered for a long time already and attacked people of our area, and it did it usually at night. The person whom he wanted to plunder interviewed also it has transferred me "thanks". "Well here one heroic act at me already is, it is not necessary" any more - I have thought.и since then never came back one night home.
It was late and the streets were empty as i was WALKING home FROM MY JOB last Friday evining. ThAT day XXX was especially silent. I WAS WALKING ALONG THE streets sINGING THE motive "I love you baby". I lookIED around. I SHOULD SAY fairly, I FELT terrible. Probably it was a presentiment. " I HAD BETTER TAKE a taxi " with this thought I TURNED ONTO ANother street AND SUDDENLY I was captured WITH wild horror AS TWO MEN WERE STANDING on the bridge and one of them had a knife. Mixed feelings were STIRRED UP in me by this show: on the one hand I understood that IT WOULD BE BETTER FOR ME to run AWAY, and on the other hand, I understood that probably I WAS THE last hope FOR the MAN ASSAULTED. I knew that I need to think up something but before I COULD MAKE THE situation OUT I HEARD A rough threatenNING VOICE: " Hey you, a mug COME here" . The second MAN rushed AWAY and the MAN with a knife RAN AFTER me. I HAD NEVER run SO FAST. MAYBE JUST at school THOUGH XXX it COULDn't be compared WITH how I WAS rUNNING AT THAT MOMENT. I LOOKED AROUND NO SOONER I reached a payphone WHERE I HID FROM MY PERSECUTOR AND WAITED FOR SOMEONE TO HELP ME. I ALSO HAD A NICE THOUGHT to call THE police. I described the person with a knife, XXX then called a taxi AND WENT HOME. THE next day THE news ON TV showed that MAN with a knife, HE TURNED TO BE AN EXPERIENCED criminal: HE HAD BEEN ROBBING PASSERS-BY IN OUR AREA for a long time, usually at night. The MAN whom THE CRIMINAL HAD INTENDED TO ROB WAS ALSO interviewed AND GAVE ME HIS thanks. "Well, I’VE DONE one heroic act, I WON’T need any more” - I XXX thought AND SWORE NEVER TO WALK ALONE IN THE NIGHT.
Костя Долгов
Костя Долгов
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Дима Масевич
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не похоже на переводчик, слишком складно и почти без ошибок. правда, только в первой половине. ее можно поправить. исправления капсом:
It was late and the streets were empty as i was WALKING back home after work last Friday evining. ThAs day it was especially silent. I WAS WALKING ALONG THE streets and SINGING A motive of a song "I love you baby". SUDDENLY I lookED around. I will tell fairly, to me it was terrible (НЕПОНЯТЕН СМЫСЛ) . Probably it was a presentiment." it was necessary to go by a taxi "with this thought I TURNED TO other street as out of tHe blue I was captured by wild horror, on the bridge there were two men and one of them had a knife. The mixed feelings were caused in me by this show (СЛИШКОМ КАНЦЕЛЯРСКИЙ СТИЛЬ) : on the one hand I understood that it WAS necessary to run, and on the other hand I understood that probably I WAS THE last hope of the person on wHO WAS BEING ATTACKED. I knew that I needED to think up something but before I started to consider a situation I HAD BEEN called WITH rough threatenING tone" hey you, a mug go here 9НЕПОНЯТНО)

Дальше переводчик уже явно не справился, тут не исправлять, а заново переводить надо. это я делать не буду
попробуй сам перевести, а не переводчиком, что бы его потом исправлять)))))