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When I was in Moscow with my mother (Mom=Mum), I went to A bridge across a river.
I wanted to take a photo from this bridge very much. When I was sitting on the bridge, someone pushed me and I fell into the river.
That bridge was a small one and my father helped me TO swim -- to the bank. I was very furious.
PS Ох уж, этот лингвист Сергей Петров: -)

When I was in Moscow with my mother, I went to the bridge across a river.
I wanted to take a photo from this bridge very much. When I was sitting on the bridge someone pushed me and I fell into the river.
That bridge was a small one and my father helped me swim over to the bank. I was very furious.

Обратите внимание, у Вас использовано слово coast, обозначающее берег океана. У реки берег называется bank.

воще полный бред, какой at? какой артикль перед москвой? какое mom? какое very перед глаголом.. . короч ...

When I was in Moscow with my mum, I came to the bridge, under which there was a river.
I wanted very much to make a photo on this bridge. When I sat at the bridge, someone pushed me and I turned out into the river.
This bridge was small and my father helped me swim to the coast. I was very furious.

тут стоит позаниматься английским 100%....
не отвечаю за то что у меня верно