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I think that it is important to have many friends but it is necessary to have one best friend.
THE best friend is a person who will never ignor my problems
A good friend is a person who trIES to understand me AND worrIES about me
A friend is a person who never betrayS me, standS by me, cheerS me in trouble.
My friend is a person who forgiveS me EVERYTHING
I think Olya is A loyal friend who will be always there when I Am in trouble, I CAN RELY ON HER
I think we can ASK each other for help or advice.
My friend is a person I FEEL never bored WITH
Besides we can talk our problems through
In general she is easy to get along with.
AN ex-friend is a person who is boring to be with
A false friend is a person who can't keep secrets AND doesn't stay by me

3 лице ед. ч. на конце - s. Например, who tries understand me....(3л. ед. ч. ) Present Simple. (Cм. грам. англ. яз. )

не знаю... уж извени

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I think, it is important to have many friends, but necessary to have one best friend. The best friend - the person who will never ignore my problems, good friend, - the person who tries to understand my anxiety concerning me, the friend - the person who never betrays me, supports me, welcomes me in trouble. My friend - the person who forgives to me irrespective of the fact, that I think, that Olya - the loyal friend who will be always there when I in trouble, it depends on me. I think, that we can turn to each other for the help or advice. My friend - the person with whom I never excited. Besides we can speak our problems through In general, easily live with it. The ex-friend - the person, who is boring to be with the false friend - the person who is bent, holds, the secret does not do by stay by me.

вы забываете, что глагол в 3-м лице ед. ч. изменяется, к нему прибавляется -s, например, she relieS me, и еще много случаев у вас таких есть, потом, AN ex-friend is a person who is boring to be with, ну как минимум такие ошибки исправьте

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вот это правильно
я всё исправила и даю тебе
I think that it is important to have many friends but it is necessary to have one best friend.
THE best friend is a person who will never ignor my problems
A good friend is a person who trIES to understand me AND worrIES about me
A friend is a person who never betrayS me, standS by me, cheerS me in trouble.
My friend is a person who forgiveS me EVERYTHING
I think Olya is A loyal friend who will be always there when I Am in trouble, I CAN RELY ON HER
I think we can ASK each other for help or advice.
My friend is a person I FEEL never bored WITH
Besides we can talk our problems through
In general she is easy to get along with.
AN ex-friend is a person who is boring to be with
A false friend is a person who can't keep secrets AND doesn't stay by me