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I have got a father, a mother and an elder sister. She is married and has a wonderful son Daniel. He’s my godchild. It is a great happiness to have a big family. As for me, I’m not married. I’m into instrumental music and fond of vocal. My days are usually busy with studies and I am often pressed for time, but I always find a few hours for my hobbies. I love animals. In my house lives a cat his name Kuzya. Most people like summer, but as for me, I like winter much better. Personally, I love wrapping up in thick scarves, woolly hats and knitted socks. I love Christmas, it has always been my favorite holiday. At present I am a student of the Faculty of Psychology of Belgorod State University, I am studying at the Department of General Psychology. I try to get on well in all the subjects. It must be remembered that any work requires dedication. You can not think only about yourself, about your interests. It is the psychologist who is able not to think about himself for the sake of others. Psychologist is a very noble profession. I really want the world to become kinder. Now we have forgotten how to love. But it's important to remember that everything starts small. It is enough to start with yourself. Therefore, I try to change for the better. I often rejoice when I see good deeds. And I believe that people are kind, they just do not have enough love and they do not know how to give it away. I hope that by becoming a psychologist, I can help them.
1. Usually I'm very busy with my studies and often pressed for time ...
2. I have a cat called Kuzya.
3. ..I prefer winter.
4. ..I like wearing woolly hats and knitted socks as well as wrapping myself in long cosy scarves.
5. ..I'm a student. I study at Belgorod State University at the Faculty of Psychology. My specialization is general psychology.
6. I try to do well at all the subjects.
7. It is well known that every job, and especially the job of a psychologist, requires devotion. In fact, a psychologist should be a person who puts the interests of other people above his own ambitions. To my mind, it's a very noble profession, and I like it very much. The modern world is really very cruel, itʹs full of wars and conflicts. People fail to understand each other, thatʹs why there is a strong need for psychologists nowadays. «If you want the world to change for the better, start with yourself», as the saying goes. And I decided to follow this advice. I specialize in psychology because I want to teach people to be tolerant, to live in peace and harmony and – I think that today many of us have forgotten how to do it! - to love each other. I believe that after graduating from the university Iʹll be able to contribute to making the world a bit kinder.
Мырзазияева Баян
Мырзазияева Баян
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Мырзазияева Баян Исправление в пункте 7 (в ответе).
Вместо: "If you want the world to change for the better, start with yourself", as the saying goes. And I decided to follow this advice. I specialize in psychology because I want to ..." - следует сказать так:

I wish the world changed for the better, so I decided to start changing it myself. I've chosen a career in psychology because I want to ...
Мырзазияева Баян Ну, и далее по тексту ;)
Мырзазияева Баян В общем, исправленный вариант должен быть таков:

... People fail to understand each other, thatʹs why there is a strong need for psychologists nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I wish the world changed for the better, so I decided to start changing it myself. I've chosen a career in psychology because I want to teach people to be tolerant, to live in peace and harmony and – I think that today many of us have forgotten how to do it! - to love each other. I believe that after graduating from the university Iʹll be able to contribute to making the world a bit kinder.
Мырзазияева Баян ... People fail to understand each other, thatʹs why there is a strong need for psychologists nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I've chosen a career in psychology because I wish to change the world for the better. I want to teach people to be tolerant, to live in peace and harmony and – I think that many of us have forgotten how to do it today! - to love each other. I believe that after graduating from the university Iʹll be able to contribute to making the world a bit kinder.
Мырзазияева Баян ... People fail to understand each other and have a strong need for someone to help them find solutions to their problems. As far as I am concerned, I wish to change the world for the better. I've chosen a career in psychology because I want to teach people to be tolerant, to live in peace and harmony and – I think that many of us have forgotten how to do it today! - to love each other. I believe that after graduating from the university Iʹll be able to contribute to making the world a bit kinder.
Мырзазияева Баян ... People fail to understand each other and have a strong need for someone to help them find solutions to their problems. As far as I am concerned, I would like to change the world for the better. I've chosen a career in psychology because I want to teach people to be tolerant, to live in peace and harmony and – I think that many of us have forgotten how to do it today! - to love each other. I believe that after graduating from the university Iʹll be able to contribute to making the world a bit kinder.
I like winter more; a student at the ..,to change myself first of all.
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