Помогите перевести (НЕ ПЕРЕВОДЧИКОМ), а настоящим Английским (Русский - Английский), за хороший перевод 10 баллов

From 2006 to 2006
He worked in the private university system administrator.
During his career, made the following:
Under my direction was a local area network, have been merged two training corps, with 86 computers plus a server.
Then, on the main server has been installed OS Linux (Fedora), on the server was connected to the Internet via static ai pi (IP) address for the realization of your web site.
I was drawn site university, whose purpose was: to attract high school graduates and people wishing to obtain a degree, enroll in our university, information for applicants.
I have developed a database for the university library, whose task was: to automate the work of librarians, thereby speed up and simplify the process of issuing books.
I was drawn control students, whose purpose was to: test and verification of knowledge, verification of student achievement.
All above mentioned has been realized with the help, PHP (4., 5.), MySQL, Apache web server on to the OS Linux (Fedora).
Parallel to my work I have independently examined the programming languages C + +Delphi.
As operating systems have been studied by Windows NT, Linux Ubuntu.

Чем тебе не нравятся переводчики? Если грамотно построить предложения, то он выдаст замечательный перевод! Один знакомый мой так вообще им на китайский сочинения переводит и в школе потом списывает! Вот твой перевод:

With 2006 on 2006 worked at private university as the system administrator.
For an operating time has made the following:
Under my management the local area network has been spent, two educational cases, only 86 computers plus a server have been united.
Further, on the network preferred server it has been established OS Linux (Fedora), further the server has been connected to a network the Internet through static ai pi (IP) the address for realisation of display of a site on the Internet.
I had been developed the university site which problem was: to involve graduates of high schools and people wishing to receive the second higher education, to arrive in our university, the information for entrants.
I had been developed a database for the university library which problem was: to automate job of librarians, thereby will accelerate and to simplify process of delivery of books.
I had been developed the control of knowledge of the pupils which problem was: testing and check of the received knowledge, check of progress of pupils.
Listed all above has been realised with the help, PHP (4., 5.), MySQL, on a web server Apache on OS Linux (Fedora).
In parallel my job by me independently were programming languages C ++,Delphi are studied.
As operational systems Windows NT, Linux Ubuntu have been studied.

Если ты не в состоянии выразить это на инглише, то нет смысла писать резюме в контору, которая требует резюме на инглише. Напиши свой вариант на инглише и попроси поправить, это будет верный путь. Сончик перевела неверно.

да вы переведите теперь обратно на русский свои "замечательные" переводы - ржать будете долго, гарантирую) )

Лови.. . народ, можете поредактировать, если кому не лень (чето я устала седня)

In 2006 I worked as a system administrator for a privately-owned university.
Over this period the following was achieved.
The local area network of 86 computers and a server was set up under my supervision, two university buildings were connected.
Then, OS Linux (Fedora) was installed on the main network server, which was afterwords connected to the Internet via the static IP address to display the web site on the Internet.
I designed the university site the purpose of which was to prompt school graduates and people who intended to get the second higher education to apply to our university. The web site featured detailed information for potential applicants.
Besides, I developed a database for the university library for the purpose of librarians' work automatization which would speed up and simplify the process of books distribution.
I also developed the students' knowledge control system which aimed to test the level of knowledge and skills the students achieved and to control their progress.
All of the above was implemented on the basis of PHP (4., 5.), MySQL on Apache web server, on OS Linux (Fedora).
Apart from my work, I studied C++ and Delphi programming languages as well as Windows NT, Linux Ubuntu operating systems on my own.

With 2006 on 2006 worked at private university as the system administrator.
For an operating time has made the following:
Under my management the local area network has been spent, two educational cases, only 86 computers plus a server have been united.
Further, on the network preferred server it has been established OS Linux (Fedora), further the server has been connected to a network the Internet through static ai pi (IP) the address for realisation of display of a site on the Internet.
I had been developed the university site which problem was: to involve graduates of high schools and people wishing to receive the second higher education, to arrive in our university, the information for entrants.
I had been developed a database for the university library which problem was: to automate job of librarians, thereby will accelerate and to simplify process of delivery of books.
I had been developed the control of knowledge of the pupils which problem was: testing and check of the received knowledge, check of progress of pupils.
All above mentioned has been realized with the help, PHP (4., 5.),, MySQL, on a web server Apache on OS Linux (Fedora).
In parallel my job by me independently were programming languages C ++,Delphi are studied.
As operational systems Windows NT, Linux Ubuntu have been studied.

Much to my regrets I can't translate your sentences ...