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В один приятный солнечный день одна девушка познакомилась с парнем в кафе и он показался ей дурачком, но ей было весело с ним и они хорошо проводили время друг с другом. На следующий день это парень пригласил ту девушку в то же кафе, где они в первый раз встретились, но сам не явился. Он пропал. И девушка не видела его несколко дней. Но вдруг, спустя столько времени он снова появляется и он очень сильно изменился...тот парень стал красивым, умным и целеустремленным. Она удивилась. Но ей он понравился, она влюбилась в него и не могла жить без него. Все попытки узнать в чем причина неожиданных перемен ни к чему не приводили. Но потом она поняла что это как-то связанно с его экспериментами по контакту с другими цивилизациями. В итоге оказывается что его на самом деле удерживают в другом мире а тот кто сейчас с ней -это инопланетянин. Девушка испугалась и не знала что ей делать. Она сталкивается с проблемой, остаться с тем кто действительно ее удовлетворяет, которого она любит, но при этом не является человеком или же попытаться вернуть своего бывшего друга...
On a fine sunny day a girl met a boy at the cafe, and she thought him to be silly, though she had a great time with him and they enjoyed themselves (или they had fun together). The next day the boy invited the girl to the same cafe, where they had met for the first time, but he failed to appear.He was missing. And the girl didn't see him for a couple of days. But suddenly, some time later he appeared again but he had changed a lot. The boy turned nice, clever and purposeful. She was surprised. But he liked her and she fell in love with him and couldn't live without him. All her efforts to find out the reason why he had suddenly changed were in vain. But then she realized that his changes might be attributed to his extraterrestrial civilization experiments. Eventually it turned out that the boy had been actually confined in another world and the girl had been accompanied by the alien. The girl was scared and didn't know what to do.She faced a problem whether to stay with the one she was satisfied with, the one she loved, but who was not human, or to attempt а difficult task - to get back her old friend...
Оксана Рыбальченко
Оксана Рыбальченко
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Оксана Рыбальченко Предыдущий ответ очень хорош! Но я бы перевела иначе несколько предложений:
он показался ей дурачком - she thought him to be silly/ she thought him to be a fool
но ей было весело с ним = but she had a good (great) time with him
где они в первый раз встретились - здесь нужно ОБЯЗАТЕЛЬНО употребить Past Perfect, а не Past Simple, так как цепочка последовательных действий прерывается упоминанием о более раннем действии - where they HAD met for the first time (или просто first)
но сам не явился = but he failed to appear или he himself didn't come. (местоимение himself именно после подлежащего стоять должно)
Он пропал = He was missing.
и он очень сильно изменился..= and he HAD changed greatly (a lot).
Она удивилась = She was surprised. (или She was stunned).
Все попытки узнать в чем причина неожиданных перемен ни к чему не приводили.= All her efforts to find out the reason why he had changed were in vain.
Оксана Рыбальченко Но потом она поняла что это как-то связанно с его экспериментами по контакту с другими цивилизациями. - Then she realized that all his changes might be attributed to his extraterrestrial civilization experiments.
в итоге - eventually (в конечном счёте, в итоге, в конце концов; со временем) As a result, на мой взгляд не подходит, так как as a result обычно употребляется в значении "в результате ...(чего-то) с последующим предлогом of: As a result of investigation, as a result of survey и т.п.
в значении "удерживают" мне кажется, глагол cоnfine = заточать, держать взаперти подходит больше, чем hold: he had been confined in another world
Девушка испугалась - The girl WAS scared
scare - испугать, а испугатьСЯ = to be/get scared
Оксана Рыбальченко своего бывшего друга.. -her old friend У слова old есть не только "старый" в смысле возраста, но и "старый" в смысле "прежний, бывший". Мы ведь и в русском языке пользуемся выражением "старый друг", подразумевая вовсе не возраст. Например в предложении: Он встретился со своими старыми друзьями, с которыми учился в школе. ("старый" здесь = "прежний, бывший")
и несмотря на то, что в исходном тексте встречается настоящее время, я считаю, что в переводе весь текст должен быть в прошлом: Past Simple и Past Perfect (в тех случаях, когда действие было не просто прошлым, а было более ранним по отношению к другому прошлому действию).
Если читать внимательно, то найдёте и другие отличия (артикли, предлоги)
One lovely sunny day one girl met a boy at the caffe, and he seemed her silly, though she was funny with him and they spent a good time with each other.The next day that boy invited the girl to the same caffe, where they met for the first time, but didn't appear himself. He disappeared. And the girl didn't see him for a couple days. But suddenly, some time later he appears again a lot changed.. that boy became nice, clever and purposeful. She wondered. But he liked her and she fell in love with him and couldn't live without him. All tries to find out the reason of his sudden changes brought to nothing. But then she realized that it is somehow connected with his experiments on the contact with other civilizations. As a result it becomes clear that actually he is hold in another world and the one with her is alien. The girl scared and didn't know what to do.She faces a problem to stay with the one she is satisfied with, the one she loves, but not human, or try to get back her former friend...
One nice sunny day, a girl met a guy in a cafe, and he seemed to her a fool, but she was happy with him and they are well-spent time with each other. The next day, this guy asked the girl at the same café where they first met, but he did not. He disappeared. And she had not seen him a number of art days. But suddenly, after so much time he reappears, and he very much has changed ...the guy was beautiful, intelligent and purposeful. She was surprised. But she liked him, she fell in love with him and could not live without him. All attempts to find out the reason for unexpected changes in either led nowhere. But then she realized that this is somehow connected with his experiments on contact with other civilizations. The result is that it actually kept in a different world and the one who is now with her is an alien. The girl was frightened and did not know what to do. She faces a challenge to stay with those who truly satisfies her, whom she loves, but it is not a man, or try to regain his former friend ...
так а на что переводить-то?
Стас Меньшиков я могу попробовать, но англ. мой второй язык, так что если что, сильно не ругаццо))))
Стас Меньшиков One nice sunny day a girl met a boy in a cafe and he seemed to her to be a little fool, but she was enjoying herself with him and they had a good time together. The next day the boy invited the girl to the same cafe where they had met each other for the first time but he himself didn't come.
Стас Меньшиков He disapeared. And the girl didn't see him for a few days. But suddenly after so much time he cropped up again and he had changed a lot... The boy was handsome, clever and purposeful then. She was surprised. But she liked him, she fell in love with him and couldn't live without him. Every attempt to know what caused such sudden changes led to nothing. But soon she understood that the reason for that was his experiments to get into contact with other civilizations. Finally it turned out that he was kept in another world and a person with her is an alien.
Стас Меньшиков The girl was frightened and didn't know what to do. She was faced with the dilemma: to be with who really satisfied her, who she loved, but who was no human at the same time or to try to return her former friend...

всё перевела!!! ну и история))))