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The United Arab Emirates are in east part of Arabian peninsula, in the south part of continent Eurasia. It is washed by waters of the Persian and Omani gulfs. Here very hot weather and summer all year long. Usual temperature in Arabian Emirates of 35-40 degrees on Celsius in the summer, and in the winter of 20-23 degrees. Capital city of the Emirates – Abu-dabi. I invite you in Dubai. It is located south of the Persian Gulf on the Arabian Peninsula and has the largest population with the second-largest land territory by area of all the emirates, after Abu Dhabi. Here it is a lot of sights. For example, the highest building in the world –Burj Khalifa, located is there. In the city it is a lot of shopping molls, here it is possible to buy everything! Oh, Girls love shopping! A sand beach, the sea, sun - it is wonderful! If you want (only) to have a rest from a noisy city – here you can it! Dubai – the quietest city in the world! I advise to you take in travel sun glasses, a bathing suit, a hat, swimming suit, the photo camera, a cream for sunburn and it is more than money because we will necessarily go on shopping! We will go to fascinating travel on deserts, we will drive on camels, we will eat national dishes! It so is interesting! Or if you do not like it, we will sunbathe under the sun and to swim in the sea. Come here quicker, I very much wait for you! I hope, our holidays will be unforgettable! And we will long remember him!
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The weather is very hot here and summer lasts all year long.
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There are a lot of places of interest here/.
is located there
In the city there are a lot of shopping malls, it is possible to buy everything here.
here you can have it.
I advise you to take
and as much money as you can
go shopping
ride camels
It is so interesting
we will lie in the sun and swim
Come here as quick as possible
I'm waiting for you
We will remember our tour for a long time
Юлия Фомина
Юлия Фомина
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The United Arab Emirates are located in the eastern part of the Arabian Peninsula and in the southern part of the continent Eurasia. It is washed by waters of the Persian and Omani gulfs. It is very warm here, the summer continues all year long. Usual temperatures in Arabian Emirates are about 35-40 degrees Celsius in summer and 20-23 degrees in winter. The capital city of the Emirates is Abu-Dhabi. I cordially invite you to visit Dubai. Dubai is located on the Arabian Peninsula to the south of the Persian Gulf. Dubau has the greatest population among all the Emirates, and the second-largest territory, after Abu Dhabi. Here you meet a lot of interesting views. For example, the highest building in the world, Burj Khalifa, is located there. In the city there is a lot of shopping molls, here you can buy everything! Oh, girls love shopping! And the sand beach, the sea, the sun - all is wonderful! If you want (only) to have a rest from a noisy city – here you can do it! Dubai is the quietest city in the world! I recommend you to take sun glasses with you, a bathing suit, a hat, a swimming suit, a photo camera, a cream for sunburn, and some money because we will necessarily go on shopping! We will go to fascinating travel in deserts, we will drive camels, we will eat national dishes! It is so interesting! Or if you do not like it, we will sunbathe under the sun and swim in the sea.
Come here as soon as you can, I am so unpatiently waiting for you! I hope, our holiday will be unforgettable! And we will remember it long time after!
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Ян Беляев
Ян Беляев
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